An Exercise in Disappointment – The Damnation Affair

First, I am going to start my saying that while I have several New Year’s Goals, none of them are to improve my Blog Posting Regularity. Perhaps it should be, but it isn’t. Instead I am resolved to rewite second drafts on two different stories; write a short story for competition submission and finish Left 4 Dead 2. Anyway, all that is completely unrelated to my post.

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It was supposed to be so good. It was supposed to be an adventure in the west, a story filled with cowboys, steampunk, and magic.

For some inexplicable reason I was convinced I just needed to read this book. I had to have it! No other story would satisfy this craving. By the end I was desperate.

A book, written by a reasonably popular author should not be that difficult to procure. However the acquisition was a trial in and of itself. The book in question was not to be found in any local book stores. There was no copy held in the library. And my request for the library to order this book went unheeded. Finally, in desperation I broke down and purchased the novel and had it shipped to the nearest book store. For two weeks I waited in anxious anticipation until finally it arrived. Until finally this weekend I could read my book. Until my dreams ended abruptly with ridiculously dumb vampires and a story that didn’t go anywhere.

damnation affairThe Damnation Affair by Lilith Saint Crow is the third book in the same world as the Clare and Bannon Series. The Clare & Bannon Series is set in an alternate Victoria world swirling with magic and mechanisms. An increasingly popular subgenera of steampunk fantasy which I have read of lately. The Clare and Bannon novels have a distinctly Sherlock Holmes vibe and Dr. Watson to them. I liked the first book well enough to read the second in the series. They were fine. A little too much magic – which seemed more than a bit silly. Oh and the mentath’s – the supposed antithesis of magic as these individuals were all about logic – were simply ridiculous. The conclusions a mentath made was based on such little information it was wildly improbable. Ultimately, the mentaths were mental mages instead of traditional magic weilding sorcerers.

But that is a small aside, as the mentaths do not appear in the third book – The Damnation Affair. And the sorcerors magic apparently works different on the new continenet – for ‘reasons’.  This was a cowboy-zombie book taking place in the Wild West of the New World. It could have been good. It should have been brilliant, after all the writing had all the flavour of the times. Flavour is important to the writing a great story. A historical piece is quickly ruined by the use of modern language. If I could point to one good thing about this book, it was the use of a western drawl by the citizens of Damnation. But in the end the language was not enough to save me from an otherwise disappointing story.

desert imageI knew the story had zombies, which are regularly a turn off. However I was willing to overlook this little hiccup for the rest of the world. I craved that New World feel, the rough and tumble of frontier living, the struggle to overcome the land and all the varied obstacles. I was even anticipating a twist on technology, the creative use of mechanicals in a land not constrained by thousands of generations of Society.

What I had was a nod to the walking dead, a town with potential – yet poorly described or explored, a romance between two orphaned characters (and yes, that is sad) and all that topped off with a demon in the hills capable of creating vampires. Really where did the vampires come from? And WHY?

There were so many other things the author could have done. Granted every idea that sprang to mind from her pages was already a well-used cliché, but this was a mess. A rather slow to build mess with threads hanging loose at every turn.  The Chinese were tossed in without regard to purpose. The magic was convoluted. The rage of some characters against the secret order of something was left completely unexplained. The feisty female doesn’t really do anything (a striking injustice to the character). Even the argument that she brings civilization from the East loses weight when one considers that the conflicts she faces just sort of fade into the background like hazy mirages. The battle of the undead lacked the big punch one would expect from the set up. And the Sheriff tosses aside every belief he has ever held for a pair of brown eyes that don’t appear to lose their luster from being buried in the dirt.

What you don’t see is the dozen of streets hidden behind the unprepossessing façade of this ‘main street’.

What you don’t see is the dozen of streets hidden behind the unprepossessing façade of this ‘main street’.

The town which is described as a single street with some half dozen buildings lining the two sides, blossoms suddenly in the second half of the book into a place big enough to house an unwanted portion of the populace in a completely different section. Really, where did these side-streets spring from?

One of the characters introduced as a villain in the first half of the book, is turned into another deputy by the end of the story for one random deed. Incidently, they never explain the shady dealings with that character. Just suddenly we are to accept him as one of the good guys – as much as the men in this town of Danmanation, plagued by the walking dead can be considered good.

I wanted to love this book. I read it with care I rarely afford my novels. I read it is slowly (for me) talking a solid 24 hours to finish. But the vampires were one straw too many and now I am left with two hundred pages of broken dreams and crushed hopes.

I desperately hope this is not foreshadowing of this year’s releases. Please, let the next book I read be better. Please…

Over the Broken Banks of Bannock Part 1

I’ve been teasing pieces of my second novel, the Clockwork Caterpillar, and recently wrote a short story set in its world and ostensibly with some of its characters. It was for a competition which, sadly, I didn’t win but that just means you fine folk get to visit Bannock earlier than expect. So there’s a silver lining there.

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Over the Broken Bones of Bannock

The whistle gave its forlorn cry. It was the shriek of a bullet right before it tears through flesh and finds mortal rest deep in the bosom of a mighty warrior. The metal wailed as brakes ground against wheels; a morose dirge for the fallen accompanied the sparks hissing into the air as a final rifle salute. It was a cry for the end of a journey. The abrupt stop, though expected, always came too early. It caught its passengers off guard no matter what preparations they took. And no matter how often Felicity went through it, each time still stung as harshly as the first.

A cloud of steam puffed from the vents creating a shrouding fog that rose from the ground about the warm steel. But heavy was the itching smell of burnt coal that carried in the wind to sting eyes and rasp throats. The metal groaned as the great sectioned leviathan came clanking down the track. With a final, resolute shudder the steel beast drew to its rest. The feet of its passengers went to work about her but they were like ghosts drifting in and out of her memory. Faces blended together and echoing voices took on different names. She could see people that no longer worked the line. Some of them were faded and indistinct, just wisps of fleeing memories. One was a young soldier, his hair tinged with the first greys and clinging to a sweaty face struggling against the consuming flames. The next was a missionary, the wide brim of his cappello romano dotted with holes that cast soft beams on a pallid face.

She then felt a hand on her shoulder, its size and warmth causing her to jump in her seat. But when she turned, it wasn’t a golden face that looked down upon her. Instead, it was the blue eyes of her engineer looking concerned from a coal smeared and sweaty face.

“We’ve arrived, captain.”

“Thanks, Laure. Best tell Schroeder to get him then. Should look to replenish our supplies while we’re here too.”

She grabbed for a gun no longer there, cursing her absent mind. She settled on her wide black hat and threw on a long duster stained with the dirt and blood of the trails. It was a wild frontier beyond the steps of the tracks and very little of it could ever be scrubbed off those that wandered it. She looked at the indistinct shades while adjusting her collar. Some of those stains were her own. Many were not. Those were left from the holes she dug and only the darkening off the cuffs remained of their passage.

She shook the door open.

The station master stepped forward. He was clad in the faded black and white stripped shirt common for his profession. A worn cap pulled over wiry white hair and a spotted forehead. Dulling eyes followed the soft ticking hands of the pocket watch, waiting for the final whistle cry before dried lips shouted the announcement.

“Fourteen and two to the hour and nay a second more!”

He clapped the watch closed, tucking it into the breast pocket as he clasped his aged hands behind his jacket. The formality of his posture tickled the back of Felicity’s mind and it was easy in the clinging steam to see another person in the fog. The long shadows looked like thick feathers drained of their once vivid colour. Curls of smoke filled a frame until it created the outline of a giant man bound with thick muscles and adorned in faded jade of the southern tribes.

Then the steam disappeared and the aged station master turned to the door. His polished shoes tapped the smooth wood of the station’s deck while an anxious finger picked at the tail of his short jacket. He smiled at the sight of his first visitor.

“Greetings and welcome to the grand shores of Bannock.”

Felicity still held the door half in its frame. With the last wisps of smoke clearing from her long black hair, the master looked at the woman’s expressionless face.

“You… are the party Metticia?”

“S.J.!” she called, turning her thin neck towards the machine’s innards.

“Aye, captain?”

“Care to deal?”

The navigator appeared behind her shoulder, adjusting the thick spectacles upon his nose.

“Mr. Metticia?”

“Oh!” S.J. cried fumbling the papers in his hand. “Lord’s Graces, forgiveness I plead. Forgiveness!”

Felicity pressed to the side as the navigator stumbled down the steps.

“That’s right, we’re the scheduled ship. But, see, Metticia isn’t my name. We’re on the sheriff’s business. Fulfilling a request of his, we are. I’ve got the papers!”

The final declaration was committed after but a moment’s pause. He shuffled through the clutched stack, offering one but quickly rescinding as the station master’s hands began to settle.

“Sorry, forgiveness Graces, that’s for the Expanse. Bannock, right? You’re a Schroeder, nay, Nicolai line?”

He turned to the station for an answer. While the name of the town was displayed prominently in bold letters above the main double doors, a number of names and lists were posted on its wood exterior.

“We’re Nicolai,” the station master confirmed as he craned his neck to look over the papers in the other man’s hands.

But S.J. kept them from sight. The master’s shoes tapped an impatient beat, one that echoed in Felicity’s ears like the last shudders of a dying heart. The tap flooded her hands with the warmth of memory, the touch of blood covering her fingers while she cried vainly into haunting winds.

S.J.’s sheets fluttered between his fingers until he produced the permit. The station master took it, clearing his throat as he held the paper to the light of the afternoon sun. He scanned the document, eyes drifting over the letters themselves but paying closer attention to the seals and signatures for signs of duplicity or forgery.

Felicity shook her head of the clinging thoughts and stepped from the engine. She gave her navigator a pat on the back.

“Make sure this is properly sorted. And take care to see we lay in port for a good while. We wouldn’t want to rush the magnate.”

“The magnate?” the master asked. “You’re here to see him?”

“I would hope,” Felicity said. She snapped her fingers and gave a quick whistle. To the master’s surprise, a young man appeared as ridiculous as he was stylish. His hair was slicked and immaculately placed. A crisp suit with full breast pockets, polished shoes and high banded collar clasped his slender frame. His guise was professionally cut and more befitting the busy streets of the Old World than the dusty steps of a frontier station. But it wasn’t the allusion to wealth that stayed the master’s tongue but the long barrelled rifle slung over the sharpshooter’s back and the thick cord in his hands. With a tug, he produced the other end which bound an unsettling man in bloodied skins and a great bandage about his shoulder.

The station master looked questioning.

“We assist with deliveries,” Felicity explained.

The man was yanked unceremoniously from the train and the woman led their small party across the station’s deck. The master couldn’t help but stare.

“Is that him, then? Dirty Hopkins?”

The station master didn’t even wait for a proper response before spitting upon the man’s filthy clothes.

“If you had any decency, you’d have thrown yourself off the Glorious Belt and into the Lord’s arms!” the master shouted. The bound man snapped against his restraints. Felicity simply whistled and S.J. quietly lead the master inside to work out their details. She gave a sharp tug on the rope to bring her captive to heel.

“You best behaving. Caused enough commotion at the bridge and I don’t need to hand you over to the magnate. It ain’t too late to grab some rope, turn around and drag you behind on the way out.”

Hopkins ceased squirming and Felicity turned to the town. A great mound towered intimidatingly, casting a long shadow over the frontier shops and homes. Most were simple, squat structures with false fronts and single stories. Between them snaked thin lines leading to small metal plates with dangling glass bulbs. The crackle of electricity filled the air and the lights flickered with the timely beat of the currents. Uneven pools winked in the dark, overbearing shadow of the soaring earth.

One building loomed over the others, a veritable bastion of tarnished steel rising in defiance of the great bulge opposite it. Its metal façade dominated the neighbouring wood, like a steel plant had grown up from the rail running through the centre of town as if the connection with the extensive network snaking the plains was a great iron root. Steady white bulbs washed the bold name of Bernhard Nicolai L.P. printed in golden letters. Thick columns of steel imitated the Doric style of antiquity. Their trunks supported a wrought balcony fringed in gold leaf and wreathed with simple ivy. The front entrance itself was a great piece constructed of bright swirls with heavy iron handles. It was like approaching the entrance of a great fortified keep rather than a place of business.

Felicity waved the slicker and captive on and the three stepped carefully over the rail and to the front steps. Their boots struck against dried wood and she looked with surprise to her companion.

“Expected it to be steel too.”

“These men love their false finish,” Schroeder said. “Almost better than the real thing. At least if it’s cheap.”

She raised a hesitant hand to the iron front and pounded a loud greeting.

Her knuckles stung from the iron and she idly rubbed the bone as they waited. After a few minutes, they could hear movement on the other side. The footsteps proceeded a great screech of metal against metal as the door opened like the thick front of a vault. Felicity stepped out of the way as the interior was revealed before them.

Standing in the centre of the foyer was a man wearing a fine suit and a congenial smile.

“Ah, you must be honoured Felicity,” he said, stretching out his arms. His voice was thick with a heavy but unidentifiable Ilian accent. It was a curious blend of central eastern influences.

“Mr. Nicolai?” Felicity asked.

“Come, come.”

Call Forth Consistency – Summoner Wars Rant

So, it appears even with my post on resolutions, neither of my co-contributors managed to put something up despite their promises to the contrary. I am shocked – shocked I tell you! But mostly I’m just happy they demonstrated my point about New Year’s resolutions. Never fear, though, I will never leave you dear reader. I am enduring just as are my misguided rants. Today’s is going to be on Summoner Wars.

SummonerWars-resizedFor some background – I was introduced to Summoner Wars first by Derek who raved online to me about how great the game was. Then, when Jeremy picked it up and I got to play it, Derek had nothing but harsh criticism for it. Go figure. However, that didn’t dissuade me from the little past time. It’s cute and quaint in its own way but it isn’t Netrunner for all the positives and negatives that entails.

But that doesn’t really tell you anything about the game.

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All cards and therefore art belong to Plaid Hat Games and whatnot.

Summoner Wars features a slightly asymmetrical confrontation between two players on a custom but simple board. Each player chooses a faction represented by a pre-fabricated deck of cards containing one Summoner, three walls, three different types of commons and three unique champions along with a handful of summoner specific events. I would probably liken the game as a mixture between Chess and Magic: The Gathering but with a focus on simplicity and accessibility. It offers some synergy between the cards, most of it focused on proper timing with events. The factions offer their own unique abilities, however, whether it be from the Swamp Orcs and their spreading walls that cover the field or the Deep Dwarves who all feature special abilities that each cost magic but have powerful timing events that make all of those abilities free for one round.

Most interesting is the economy of the game is focused around magic. Well, that in of itself isn’t interesting, but magic is built either through conscious discards from your hand or by landing the final blow on a monster or wall. A player is forced to make tough decisions about whether they want to play their little common minions or discard them for magic to build up a large enough pile to bring forth a champion (all of whom cost far more than the commons). Positioning becomes important as players try to control the board and ultimately the flow of dead bodies by their movement and placement of walls. More importantly, my sister and I have found that it is almost as valuable to kill your own guys as it is to kill the enemies. You only have the opportunity to attack with three cards per turn, however, so it becomes yet another balancing act of choosing whether to go for a full out assault or making quick strike forces which you then murder before the enemy has the opportunity.

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The unique and inspiring Tundra Orc Smasher.

It’s quick to pick up, taking a game or two to grasp the basics fairly easy. And the fact that it’s a deck based game with very simple deck building rules as well as pre-constructed armies means introducing new players is a breeze. While I applaud Netrunner for its complexity, it does have the issue of forcing players to keep up with new releases in order to stay competitively viable. But almost a third of a Summoner Wars deck is locked; you can’t mix and match events between summoners, can only have three champions and you must stay within faction when building (or include mercenaries). There’s a very limited pool that doesn’t grow nearly as fast as Netrunner. Especially when new releases for Summoner Wars are often new factions.

So the simplicity is Summoner Wars greatest strength. You can sit down and play it right out of the box without having to construct a deck and when you’re done you can just shelve it knowing it’s ready to go next time you want to battle your opponent.

This isn’t to say the game doesn’t have its flaws. What I want to focus on today, however, is less on the game systems on more on its “fluff.” Specifically, one of the biggest issues I have with Summoner Wars is its art and its themes.

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The artist apparently hates feet.

Each faction follows the same formula: stereotypical Tolkein fantasy race preceded by a generic adjective. You have the likes of Swamp Orcs, Sand Goblins, Tundra Orcs and Guild Dwarves squaring off against one another. Elves are on display in the delightful Phoenix (fire), Shadow and Jungle varieties. The closest we get to a unique offering are the Mountain Vargath which are goatmen… from the mountains. So, bonus points for representing goatmen which don’t see ubiquitous fantasy representation but it’s not like we really ran off with the idea here.

Even worse is that the themes of these factions is absolutely lazy and thoughtless. My biggest gripe with the game is that I detest the art. And I don’t mean this just from a style perspective. Though, style is one of my biggest issues. The direction they went with is a very simple, painterly direction. There’s few details and each card is over dominated by the three primary colours used to distinguish each faction. The event cards for the summoners show a zoomed in section of their face which just further highlights the basic design. You could argue that this helps to place the emphasis on the text but Summoner Wars, as mentioned, isn’t a particularly complex system and if Netrunner and Magic: the Gathering can afford to have some rather beautiful art than so can this game.

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Best part about the jungle guard is that they’re supposedly reclusive hermits on the fringes of their society, eschewing the rest of their people’s ways and luxuries… while looking the exact same as their kin.

But outside of the direction, I think the biggest problem with this approach is that it makes all the cards from one faction blend together. Distinguishing between an Jungle Elf Archer and elite Jungle Guard is based more on posture than unique silhouette or form. Summoners and champions lack visual punch to really make them stand out amongst the crowd as well. And this isn’t even broaching the ridiculous use of high heeled battle boots on the few females that show up either.

This bland art flows directly from the rudimentary theming of the factions. I almost can’t blame the artists for providing little visual interest in their designs when they are given something to work with like Glurp the champion of the Swamp Orcs. Course, this isn’t an excuse, for a talent artist would be able to design something from practically nothing. If the art is uninspire, however, the theming is just downright apathetic. The Swamp Orcs main feature is that they grow vine walls across the battle field. Let me throw some emphasis on that last sentence: the Swamp Orcs grow vine walls.

I don’t know if the designers at Plaid Hat Games have seen a swamp so let me link some pictures to demonstrate:

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I’m even being generous with this one. It’s a mangrove swamp and could have worked with their design theme if they’d just chosen to go with Root Walls instead.

Not a vine in sight. I’m not sure why the Swamp Orcs are focused on vines but the Jungle Elves are not. In fact, the Jungle Elves are equally contentious with the majority of their faction filled with elephants, hyenas,  rhinoceroses and lions. For those not fluent in basic ecology, all these creatures are to be found in African  Savannahs, not the tangled undergrowths that are typically associated with jungles. To top it all off, their second summoner about to be released is wrapped in a white wolf pelt because apparently the artists can’t even be bothered being remotely close to the faction’s theme (yes, I know it’s to keep with the white primary of their faction but they didn’t even need to choose white as one of the three distinguishing colours of the Jungle Elves in the first place).

This gets back to my earlier complaint about how fantasy seems to be drowning beneath the cliches of its genre.   On one hand, Summoner Wars attempts to subvert the tropes of typical fantasy by giving some of their races uncharacteristic ecological backgrounds. But then, when I look at the Tundra Orcs, there’s nothing that really makes them unique from a standard orc other than they have blue skin. They’re still barbaric savages decorated in bone and scraps of cloth. Why aren’t the Tundra Orcs wrapped in hides and furs to keep them warm? It seems like such a logical conclusion from their name.

To finish, I just want to include a picture of a dwarf from the upcoming Obsidian game Pillars of Eternity. Little has been revealed about the setting but I think the image will do most of the talking for me.

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Concept art for Pillars of Eternity copyright to Obsidian.

At the end of the day, Summoner Wars isn’t ruined by it’s poor art and horrific faction themes. But it’s not made better by them either. Other games are celebrated for their different factions and spend the appropriate time developing them and distinguishing them. The Corporations in Netrunner are all very well realized and I think it makes the game as a whole a lot better for it.

New Year’s Resolutions

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It’s a new year and with it comes new expectations and hopes. Having posted the rather lengthy Kinslayer Chronicle, I felt that perhaps it was time for a bit more of my random musings. And what better to fill this blog with than my thoughts on an age old western tradition.

The first thing I was asked by friends after the clock struck twelve on January 1st (once we actually started talking since we’re all approaching that point in life where we don’t see any value in staying up abnormally late anymore) was what I had resolved to do this year. My response was short and rote. I’m upholding my resolution years ago to not make New Year’s resolutions. It’s a cop-out, I know but bear with me as I explain myself.

Talk to most people and they all have similar goals. Fitness and dieting are high amongst them as is the utter devotion to their goals for a good solid two to three weeks. And then, inevitably, the resolutions fall to the wayside. I had my fair share of “get healthy” promises each year. It wasn’t until university that I began to approach health and fitness a bit more seriously. And I didn’t leave it to little early morning resolution either.

I am focused on self-improvement. Perhaps not the most evident quality I exhibit but one that shouldn’t be a surprising confession. I’m an introvert and for years in school kept wanting to be more popular and liked. But worry about making a fool of myself kept me reclusive and withdrawn. It wasn’t until after numerous self-berating sessions in the shower that I realized there was nothing standing in my way than myself. Course, my solution in the wisdom of youth was to stop caring what others thought of myself and though perhaps not the most accurate attitude to correct it did accomplish the goal I set. I joined Drama Club, got more involved in activities and found myself forming more friendships than I have since. My desire to achieve greater self confidence was won and without having to make a routine promise at the flipping of a calendar.

Thus, in university, my decision to get healthy was a similar random decision. I set a time I would go to the gym, I began borrowing weights from friends and I made a conscious decision every week to meet a minimum exercise goal. I wasn’t successful at first. I made many mistakes. I had several injuries. I did things in the most arduous manner possible. But sheer stubborn will saw me through and I formed the habit I wanted. I also weened myself off sugar.

So, accomplishing the goals of a new year’s resolution were done outside of the social convention. There is just something about the ritual itself that I don’t want to tie to my success. There’s almost an expectation that these resolutions are meant to be broken. I saw it all the time in the gym. The first three weeks of the new year were always the worst. There were all these new faces clogging up the machines and forming lines for the weights. And you just knew, as you tried to grow accustomed to these queues, that these people’s time was numbered. I grew almost resentful of the fact that I had to wait on them – these individuals that had no real desire to be there but just came out because of some silly tradition.

Which, of course, was unfair but I was much younger back in those golden years.

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And sometimes these rituals have merit. My first novel was essentially accomplished under the requirements of a new year’s resolution. When I was in Japan, I spent New Years with one of my student’s family. They took me to the nearby shrine to enjoy the festival and encouraged me to purchase a Daruma doll. These little bearded Buddhas are sold without pupils. When you obtain one, you make a wish to accomplish something that year and you draw in one of the eyes. Then you set the little devil on the table so he stares at you unblinking with that one eye. Only once you’ve completed your wish are you able to finish his sight. My wish that year was to write a novel and the guilt that guy instilled kept me motivated on that milestone task.

Course, you’re also suppose to return him to his home shrine and throw him on an enormous pyre at the end of the year but I wasn’t going to fly back to Japan to complete the full exercise. Instead, I keep him on my dresser as a reminder of my success.

So, the long and the short of this is I do make yearly resolutions. This year I’m trying to revamp my schedule in such a way to increase productivity while re-aligning my time to sync up better with friends and family. I have a poor tendency to grow somewhat insular, especially when I’m working, so hopefully this will make me a little less of a troglodyte.

Course, if anyone asks, I’m still holding to my resolution to not make any.

Kinslayer Chronicle Part 16

Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays and New Year. So wraps up the last of 2013 and I can’t think of any better way to see out the year than with the final chapter of the Kinslayer Chronicle. Yes, you heard me right, this is the last one. I hope and wish everyone had a celebratory winter break and got all they wanted and more with their loved ones.

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Waning Winter by Walter Launt Palmer (1906)

Chapter 14 – The Finale

“And that’s what I learned,” Lafnis said.

She came to a stop at the edge of the Naupstern woods. The trees still crawled down the craggy hills but sporadically now. Few farmsteads tried to dig ferns from the blasted rock and the cold Janogradt winds pulled at their clothes. The Chronicler shivered beneath his cowl.

“Sounds like a thrilling tale,” he finally said.

“Well, you know how the bards are,” Lafnis shrugged. “I’m sure they have much better flourish. I’m no storyteller.”

“Nor bar maid.”

She didn’t retort. Her face looked tired and her eyes distant. She turned to the land and stared at the distant horizon.

“I suppose you are right, scribe.”

“So, what are you then?”

“What are any of us? A wanderer and a traveller. Perhaps, even, a little lost and looking for my own way. I’m no hero or villain. Just a simple woman.”

And in that moment she unclasped her cloak and handed it to him. The Chronicler looked at it with wide eyes and shook his head.

“I couldn’t!”

“Please,” she said, “it will be cold and there’s no use in you getting ill. I have another back at the inn.”

And she pressed it forcibly into his hands.

It was still warm to the touch. With reluctance, the Chronicler wrapped it about his shoulders. The fabric was heavy on his weary body but he couldn’t deny that it held the insufferable weather of that kingdom at bay. He couldn’t help but feel a little more comfortable and a little more safe.

“Thank you.”

“It’s really I who should thank you,” she said.

And he looked at her quizzically.

“You’ve made it clear that it’s time I moved on myself. My business in Talarheim is concluded.”

“What will you do now?”

“I don’t rightly know. What of you?”

“I shall head back to my quarters. My brothers will probably enjoy the story I bring to them. Most thought it foolish to seek the Kinslayer. Many don’t even believe him to be alive. I suppose this will lend credence to those accusations. It pains me to return home empty handed but maybe I can discover a new lead from my chapter’s monastery.”

“Ah, to return home.”

Once again, she looked wistfully over the horizon.

“Will you never return to yours?”

“I have few fond memories of it,” she sighed. “I do not think there is a place for me there.”

“And what fondness do you hold for it?”

“Well,” she thought for a moment. “I want to remember it like I did when I was a child. A small, quiet retreat in a waving sea of heather.”

She gave the Chronicler a smile and gentle bow of her head.

“Meili watch you,” she prayed and began into the trees.

The Chronicler stood, shifting his satchel and mentally preparing for the distance before him. As he his eyes scanned the scrubby, moss swollen earth, the last of her words lingered in the tickling recesses of his mind. A sea of heather couldn’t be found in these blasted lands. His initial impression of her origins must be accurate.

She had to be from the south. And the strange cadence in her voice almost sounded Memnon. Which would explain its confused cadences for they were a people that stretched over many lands. And then he began to think upon the weapon he had seen her with the night they met. And he began to consider her words a little more closely.

And Scarlet Heather did start to strike him as an odd name for a man.

Revelations sometimes dawn later than they should. He turned, his lantern swinging wildly on the staff as he ran quickly down the worn Crossroads. He was panting and sweating after a short while and had to stop, the weight and warmth of the cloak preventing him from making much progress. But he looked about for the young woman. There was no way she had outpaced him this much moving at a leisurely stroll.

As he stood hunched on the road, he couldn’t help but feel the neighbouring farmstead looked awfully familiar. Though there was little to distinguish the homes in Talarheim, this one looked remarkably like the same home he had run into Lafnis only two days prior. It was then wondered what had brought her out that dark evening. He recalled that wicked weapon and how she held it at the ready when she first accosted him.

And the air almost smelled sickly sweet as it rushed from beneath the trunks of the Naupstern Forest.

Taking one careful step after another, he moved from the road and towards the tree line. His fingers tightened about the length of his staff. His muscles tensed with worry. He could almost feel invisible eyes watching him from the deepening shadows and his heart held its peace as he took shallow breaths. Only the faintest footprints remained in the soft moss. It took much effort to follow them as they wove away from the tumbled road and away from any witness. The hill began to rise as the smell of decay grew more potent.

And then he caught sight of the tumbled stones. The ghostly visage of some faded hero stared up from the severed head that lay in the clutching weeds. The ancient monuments of a people long past barely struggled for air beneath the soft green carpet of the woods. Like great humps were those ancient stones, lying on their sides with furry green ferns and mosses hiding their skin. The remnants of an older stone circle than the one in Talarheim took vague shape. Even the trees seemed to respect the small hilltop, creating a short break in the woods. He paused on the outer limits, turning to see the stretching plains visible above the sharpened tops of the trees below.

Steeling his nerves, he braved rounding the single remaining stone standing in the centre.

He gasped.

Strapped to its front were charred remains. The cold remains of a long dead fire lay disintegrating beneath the charred feet. Neatly folded and laying upon a small mound to the side were the wet and prickled clothes. Leaves from the storm stuck from the cloth in every angle. Reaching carefully, the Chronicler sifted through the folds. The pockets had been emptied but tucked in the recesses of the shirt was a solitary piece of paper. He unfolded it and held it to the sun.

He was not expecting to see the face of Kodie sketched upon it. A list of crimes were scribbled in the margins but none of them were attributed to the Scarlet Heather. Most appeared to be rather harmless, with chief amongst them being the abandonment of time owed to a slaving merchant. There were other references to the releasing of unsold slaves and theft of property.

And he recalled her words.

“Even the greatest hero is just a man – nothing more and nothing less.”

The Chronicler began to believe one rumour about Scarlet Heather.

Merry Christmas

On this day, I wish you all a Merry Christmas (or politically correct Happy Holiday!)

To all those involved in celebrating at this time, I hope you are enjoying a day of friends and family. May your time be filled with good food and excellent companionship – in my case beating my brother at his brand new board game, summoner wars. Other highlights of my day included watching Newsroom and finishing my annual gingerbread house.

This year I created a template to resemble my actual house. The idea was to make it look real-ish. The product was not as clean or well exicuted as I had hoped. The gramcrackers do not look like siding and the dried cranberries are shaped more like red stone than brick. Yes, the large block on the right is supposed to be garage door. However, I have photographed it for memory and will enjoy looking at it for the next week or so.

gingerbread houseMerry Christmas everyone!

Kinslayer Chronicle Part 15

So Derek has been on holidays for almost a week now and there’s no sight or sound of a post from him. But fear not, dear reader, I still appreciate you. I wouldn’t leave you in the cold and alone. Even with blessed Christmas but two days away I will still give you your weekly dose of Kinslayer Chronicle. Because I am the one that cares. I care.

And I am here now.

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Pirates Fighting at Sunrise by Horace Vernet (1818)

Chapter 13 – The Story of the Fallen King

Larkin was an admiral, if reputation is to be believed. Commanded a sizable fleet off the shores of the breaking coast for King Alderman. That was, of course, until the kingdom’s downfall during the Memnon conquests. Legend has it that the good admiral was waging a battle with most the fleet against a neighbouring crown and when he arrived bloodied but victorious he found a throne usurped and a leader beheaded. His men and his ships were captured upon docking and were led to the keep’s dungeons. It is said they were held for five years before they received their release and they emerged into a land they didn’t recognize.

Larkin had no crew, no ship and no liege. Worse, the strange ways and customs of the Memnon invaders had replaced all that was familiar. The five years behind the dark bars had locked him from much change. Foreign tongues wagged upon the piers and merchants dealt in unfamiliar coin. All he had was confiscated during his incarceration and he was left coin-less and destitute upon the streets.

But a sailor, even conquered, is a valuable commodity. Especially to those naval nations. And the Memnon were a widespread empire looking to expand the scope of their trade even further along the coasts. Despite his tongues languidness in their speech, he still proved a capable worker. He secured a position on a trade vessel and while it was no longer at the helm, he was upon the seas. It was a slow career though and the Memnon captains could be harsh masters especially to the conquered people.

There are many stories of mutinies. So common are they you would think that all Memnon vessels were lost to foreign hands. But by most accounts, the captain was a fair man. Harsh in punishment but generous in reward, he ran his ship with just as much skill as one would expect. Truthfully, the stories of mutinies are often less about gross abuse and neglect as they are a series of unfortunate choices and circumstances. By the bard’s recount, the Memnon ship had made port in a distant land. What their purpose there was likely an exchange of goods since nothing else but war would attract them. However, whatever the original agreement was it was not fulfilled. For whatever reason, the Memnon ended up with a cargo of slaves to be sold on the distant markets.

The captain was furious and not just because of the change in agreement. One did not take a Memnon contract lightly. But the captain accepted, though they were ill supplied for the journey. Their food stores were low and now they were tested further with the addition of a cargo that required sustenance. The captain judged they had enough to make it to their port of call.

He was wrong.

Three days into the voyage a terrible storm knocked them off course. By the time they had recovered, they had lost nearly five days into the trip. Storms are bad on their own. Sailors see them as ill omens and the danger of capsizing is ever present in their mind. So dangerous is the profession, that any sign of ill pleasure from the gods can raise tensions on the cramped quarters to fevered levels. That is when the skill of the captain is put most into question.

But this wasn’t just a storm that plagued the ship. They were in unfamiliar waters. Isolated and worried, it was a question of making landfall to see if they could scavenge or press on in the hopes they could ration and make port. It’s impossible to know which is the right decision for you will never know the potential problems of the other choice.

What did happen, was they began to grow hungry. A Memnon is a dangerous bedfellow in these trying voyages. The captain ordered the slaves receive nourishment even as his crew were rationed less and less. Perhaps he had feared a mutiny from the cargo and overestimated the loyalty of his crew. Perhaps he wanted to insure the slaves would bring good coin if kept healthy. It matters not. All it did was breed resentment amongst his men. Talk began that he favoured his own profits over the lives of his crew. And when left on the seas with nowhere to go, you don’t want those ideas taking root.

It’s difficult to say who is to blame. Perhaps the captain could have made better choices. Maybe there was true betrayal in the ranks and a rival was seizing upon an opportunity to advance beyond his station. Or maybe the honeyed words of the captives finally won over a hungry and thirsty keeper. Sometimes all it takes is just the worm of the idea to escape one lip and then all the rest think some plan is in motion. In such cramped quarters, you didn’t want to be caught on the wrong side.

While the legend says that Captain Larkin led the mutiny, your precious truth is likely lost to the waves. What is known is that the ship never made dock. The captain was never heard from again. And there was a new ship on the seas with a motley crew of ex-slaves and conquerors roaming the waves.

The life of a pirate is perhaps less exciting than imagined. For the most part, the ship was more like a merchant vessel. Only that their cargo was contraband and other items of ill-repute that more honest dealers would never risk carrying. Even though many of the crew were once slaves themselves didn’t prevent them from carrying others to be sold into servitude elsewhere. Honour is rare amongst those that needn’t be beholden to governing laws. And there’s much of oneself that will be sacrificed to insure food on the plate and a warm bed in the eve.

But you wish not to hear of Dread Pirate Larkin.

The important note is that Captain Larkin wasn’t unwed. While he had served his king, he had married a young thing. During the conquest, she had been led to believe he had died and was left to tend to his children. Thus was her surprise when he returned one day, a lavish ship moored in the cove and bearing gifts for his sweetheart. Perhaps you expect her to have sought the love of another in his absence, but she had held true for her husband. Though that didn’t ease the shock of his arrival.

He lavished her with the attention he felt was overdue. But he never disclosed his new position. He maintained that his business was of legal barter. Whether she knew or suspected otherwise was unimportant. She lived the lie, enjoying what time they shared while his ship lay anchored in the waters and when he had to leave she would wait patiently for his return once more.

The years passed and his children began to grow. They were raised to believe their father an honest merchant. Their curiosity for the sea was always stifled when he was on shore. They would watch his ship come in but only he ever left its deck. They begged and pleaded to be with him, to join him on his vessel, but such a request could never be granted.

And it was inevitable that they learned the truth some day.

It was the Memnon guards themselves that arrived at the small inn who revealed his terrible secret. How they learned of Captain Larkin’s quiet little secret is impossible to say. There are those that suggest it was the same old treachery of a close confidante hoping to usurp his ship and his business. Perhaps he had grown too bold and was infiltrated or followed by one of the trained Memnon men. All that is known is that they arrived at the small family inn and Captain Larkin’s wife was held helpless as she entreated the men who waited patiently the pirate’s return.

His ship docked and he came alone, as he always does. She couldn’t warm him. Her children were being held as ransom. Thus, he entered and was greeted by a smiling wife. Even if the smile never reached her eyes. Before the startling truth could be revealed, he was surrounded. As with any pirate captain of note, he knew there was only one end for him if he were captured. Piracy, especially of the Memnon, was high treason. There would be a trial but he would be hanged. Likely in a metal cage over the harbour so his body could be picked at by the birds as he starved. It was the favoured warning of the Memnons to others foolish enough to entertain the thoughts of crime against the empire.

He fought as most are apt to do. A less experienced guard ran him too far through and the Captain would have his desired death free of humiliation. His children watched the struggle and death of their father just as they learned the reason for his death.

The Memnon’s then seized upon the ship, sailing their own into the bay. It is said that the cannons rang well into the night; the fire lit the black sky as they laid battle. It is impossible to say how many died or even how many managed to escape. But the ship was captured and those still drawing breath were hauled away for their executions.

Of course, that left the troubling case of the children. The mother pleaded ignorance but the Memnon are thorough. She was taken in place of the husband to stand for his crimes. The children were turned over to the empire, too young to be persecuted by their own laws. They were able to bear witness to their parent’s case, however, though they were spared watching her punishment.

As to be expected, there are but two outcomes for such a history. One, a child grows to resent and loathe the parent’s destiny. Feelings of ill will and revenge harbour in the heart even as a mouth is fed and mind taught at the murderer’s table. The other is to accept what has occurred, to come to peace with what happened and to move on.

And you could see the difference in approach between Captain Larkin’s children. Poul, the eldest, immersed himself in the trappings of his conqueror. Along with their fleets came their way of life and that included the training and education of the city’s orphans. These children of the empire were raised to be magistrates and officials in the court of their oppressors. Poul was the ever vigilant, ever obedient agent for his Shaiki. He did much in his service, rooting out resistance and threats to the empire while adjudicating trials and disputes between the Memnon and their conquered people. He had a reputation for ruthlessness and disregard for common empathy. While the Memnon argued that leaving the choice of their disputes in the hands of one of their own made the decision more even-handed, so often only those most devoted to the empire’s cause would be granted their positions.

And Poul long favoured his master’s side. Those seeking grievances dreaded being brought before him, knowing that their fate was sealed by the mere colour of their skin. ‘A matched set is an ill pair,’ came the saying. But this devotion won him more and more favour with those that occupied the throne.

The power of an empire as large as the Memnon, however, could not last. Their unrepentant warmongering garnered few allies. And striking deeper and deeper into cultures so unlike their own alienated the surrounding nations. These crowns feared their very way of life was at stake beneath these hostile fleet of armed merchants. They refused co-operation. Many struck deals with age old enemies to unite against this common threat. Skirmishes broke along the great length of the Memnon borders and their soldiers and coffers were stretched thin trying to maintain their expansive reach.

Their most recent conquests were the first to fall. You would expect Poul, with his reputation, would have been executed along with the Memnon invaders. But that would be underestimating the man’s insidiousness. All those years of obedient servitude was to gain the trust of his masters. When the gates were being stormed, he was there in the inner chambers running his dagger through the throats of the men he’d shared dinner with the night before.

The liberators awarded his actions by maintaining his magistrate position in the wake of the city’s freedom. But this just replaced a foreign interest with a local tyrant. For while he loathed the Memnon as much as the rest of his people, he hated his subjects just as much. He saw the conquered as weak willed and supplicating, willing to turn over for a strong ruler no matter how abusive he was. He proved his position by ruling even worse than the Memnon. For, it seemed, the Memnon expectation for him to conform to their ideals kept him in check. Now, there was nothing preventing him from carrying out the cruelest, harshest sentences for even the lightest crimes now.

It seems that there are more ways to commit piracy than sailing the high seas. And the children of Dread Pirate Larkin had piracy in their blood.

But now there were none to defend the populace. Where once there were constraints and restrictions, Magistrate Poul was unhindered and unbound. All his detractors were quietly eliminated during the siege and reformation afterwards. He filled his administration with sycophants and fearful servants. The guard bowed to his will and the liberators excused themselves from the city. They were not interested in the day to day interactions and so long as taxes continued to fill their coffers and the Memnon were deposed, talk of a tyrannical magistrate was just not a priority. All hope seemed lost.

Until the returned of the prodigal Scarlet Heather. For all this time, the other Larkin child had been missing. The bards sing of the deeds now, but to the people Scarlet Heather was perhaps just a fleeting memory. Some remembered that there were two children and not just the indomitable man sitting in the keep. Which worked to the Scarlet Heather’s favour. For, you see, Poul’s spies were none the wiser. They kept not watch for kin but dissenters and debtors.

And a terrible truth carried the Scarlet Heather. This was before the epitaph Kinslayer. This was before all the stories. While a name was made by action, few would put much stock in far off deeds. What would be one more unknown adventurer in a town that had seen conquerors and Shieki.

And while I would like to say that the Scarlet Heather returned to finally bring the freedom long deserved, an ulterior motive was at play. For, it seems, contrary to the Memnon story, the Larkin’s mother hadn’t been slain. The trial had been carried out but the punishment had been stayed. The famed pirate’s wife had been whisked away along trade routes and ship passages to distant shores and distant borders. She was presented before the great leaders of the Memnon and inducted into their harems. She was just another trophy to be paraded before officials, a symbol of the conquered people in the farthest corners of their empire.

But worse than this revelation was after her rescue, the Scarlet Heather learned that Magistrate Poul knew of this duplicity. His masters had informed him and he’d merely laughed, saying such fate befitted a woman foolish enough to resist the empire.

Thus, the city’s citizens saw Scarlet Heather’s return as the final hero they had been waiting for. But the pirate that had followed in dreaded Larkin’s footsteps cared little for their plight. It was personal revenge that brought the sails into the twice walled harbour. Beneath the banner of kinship, the Scarlet Heather was brought to Magistrate Poul’s residence. They feasted and they talked. And in that moment the Scarlet Heather decided that dear brother Poul had to die.

Of course, no such things are easily resolved. It would not do to simply grab the butter knife and assault the magistrate’s jugular. Despite entreating his own, Poul was still a cautious individual. All weapons were stripped upon entry and guards stood watch. So long had the siblings been separated and so much had the magistrate evaded that he wouldn’t let his guard down even for his sibling. The two departed on seemingly amicable terms, but behind the smiles deathly plots danced.

Magistrate Poul’s hand played first. Scarlet Heather’s ship was set alight in the middle of the night, burning like a terrific pyre in the centre of the water. Archers awaited on the piers, arrows notched for any body that attempted to flee the blaze. Hoodlums were blamed, as was the magistrate’s ways, but most knew when the city watch observed there was to be no interference until the blaze ran its course.

The ship was a marvellous foreign construct of rich dark wood and terrific sails. But despite its exotic construct it still carried the traditional carved prow of a ferocious serpent. Long had that fabled creature guided fellow vessels to safe harbour. And for its reward, it was burned to ash. Rubies sank to the bottom of the harbour that night, but none dared dive for them while the steely eyes of the archers watched the waves.

Of course, such brutish response was expected from the magistrate. Scarlet Heather was no fool and knew well in advance of the magistrate’s reputation. Little did either sibling anticipate the war that would be waged in the streets. Much is said, both good and ill, of either sibling. And when kin fight, so often are innocents caught in the crossfire. While many citizens would call the guard corrupted and sinful, the truth is many of them were just doing a job. They had family and mouths to feed alike and tyrants are not want to distinguish between their subjects. But that didn’t stop the Scarlet Heather from doing the pirate’s deed. Attack bred retaliation and both sides began to feel the sting of conflict.

Though the bards sing of the final hours. The street war, which by most accounts lasted for five bitter months, carried atrocities on both side. It came to an end not with one sibling claiming advantage over the other. Instead, it was the simple arrival of a pilgrim that sheathed swords. She rode up with little escort to the beleaguered city gates. And when she announced herself, none would deny her entry.

It was a sight to behold. It felt like the entire garrison had come forth, lining the streets with the strict order to let the pilgrim pass. Citizens gathered, fearful of what may come but curious at this sudden display of security. Some members were pressed into beautifying the path, baskets of flowers supplied the petals thrown like thick flakes of snow at the weary horse’s feet. Grim reminders of the sibling’s struggle were either removed or blocked from the procession’s view. Finally, a peace had come to the city the likes of which had only been seen during the winter pageant’s All-Father’s feast. Whispered questions of this emissary’s identity abound but no announcement was made until the pilgrim and her troupe arrived to the doors of the magistrate’s home.

There, she dismounted, handing her horse to a faithful servant. All expected her to turn and make her way to the temple to pay her respects. Instead, she turned to the crowd, unwrapped her wimple and revealed herself as Dread Larkin’s wife. She announced that she had finally arrived home after many long years of servitude to the Memnon. And she was to be a herald of the freedom the city had long deserved.

The people cheered as the guards opened the gate and ushered her in.

Who knows what possessed her to reveal herself to the crowd. Surely, few would have recognized her on her own. Her admitted relation to Magistrate Poul should have, by all accounts, turned opinion quickly against her. But so stirring was her tale, so certain was her speech that the populace was won on sheer conviction alone. Long had they waited for a sign of the end and that sign had rode in right through their gate.

There are some that suspect a less benevolent motive. Given her son’s reputation, her announcement and adoration from the crowd may have served to dissuade the magistrate from performing his own matricide. Tension was strong in the air and the struggle with Scarlet Heather had stirred much resentment towards the once feared ruler. Harm to the elder Larkin could have been the final catalyst that would set his people upon him.

And so they dined. Many waited outside the gates expecting to her the mother’s strangled cry from the open windows. But the elder Larkin’s guard stood proud and strong. What they lacked in number, they made up for in experience. Perhaps Magistrate Poul was considering a more subtle approach for once. Certainly, there could be no love between mother and child. And while she played the doting parent, it was clear both were changed after so many years. The bonds of blood were diluted and the issue of politics a terrifying wedge. In order to keep power, it seemed obvious that the magistrate would have to remove his mother.

It was then his guards began to whisper of disloyalty and mutiny. The signs were drawing clear, much like the Memnon captain who’d lost his vessel to Dread Larkin, Magistrate Poul was losing his people to the charm of Mother Larkin. She exhibited such courtly grace, humility and piousness unmatched by anything seen in those halls before. For years in the Sheiki’s harem had taught her skills unknown to her offspring and she used these new talents to great effect.

For twelve days she resided in his estate and for twelve days Magistrate Poul wrestled with how to eliminate her. Finally, he stumbled upon the solution. There was no way for him to gain the trust of her fellowship and sneak in himself. Delivering the blade was too tricky a proposition. But none would suspect treachery from her own retinue. And while some hearts are won through love and loyalty, most are gained through cold, hard coin. It was just a subtle matter of placing the right amount in the right hand.

And one of Magistrate Poul’s talents was finding that hand. A special kind of courtship began, one where wine and favours were directed with specific intent. Trust and character were carefully tested and examined, like a siege force prodding the walls of a city. When at last the weakest point was found, a clandestine meeting was arranged. A plot was laid and the fate of a Larkin was sealed in blood and gold.

What followed was a brutal betrayal. But not for who you’d suspect.

For the elder Larkin did not come to the city of her own accord. She was pressed into service by another. And the following day, Magistrate Poul would learn the startling truth. The assassination was foiled and a rabble were at the gates as elder Larkin stood protected by Magistrate Poul’s fiercest guards.

And standing before the crowd with the proof of Poul’s misdeed was the Scarlet Heather. So blinded was he with his double crossings that he didn’t sense his worst enemy behind the helmet. With evidence in hand, there was no recourse left to his mother but to condemn him for his actions. Whether she knew of the plot or was finally convinced of his sinister intent is unclear, but the condemnation she raised was sincere and more powerful than any wizard’s spell.

The gates were torn down and not just by the citizens. Guards joined the mass, charging the few who held their posts. Most abandoned their weapons, forfeiting their fate to the crowd. Magistrate Poul turned to the last course left. He fled.

But Scarlet Heather gave chase. A terrible and trying pursuit erupted through the Magistrate’s estate and into the streets. Both siblings made to finish the other. All pretences were done. One would die that day. One would pay the ultimate price for the sins of the family.

They burst from the city gates into the country-side. And there, over the cliffs that rose above their old inn the bards sing they finally came to conflict. The outcome is clear, if by name and not deed alone. All that can be said is that Magistrate Poul was not seen there again and the Kinslayer had been born.

Kinslayer Chronicle Part 14

Good holiday news! We’re about halfway through the Kinslayer Chronicle! You don’t think I chose Chronicle just by happenstance, did you?

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Northern Lights. Not my picture but found on the Internet.

Chapter 10 – The Final Regret

His feet were heavy on the stairs as he came down. The hall was empty once more but sounds rang from the kitchen as if nothing had changed in that small inn. The Chronicler set his satchel upon the table, slipping onto the hard bench and clasping his hands together. He didn’t wait long before she emerged, kerchief tied about her head and face just as red as yesterday.

She sighed and rolled her eyes when she spotted him sitting at the table.

“I told you, I’m no wizard. I can’t know if you’re up if you don’t say nothing!”

She stomped back to the kitchen but the Chronicler was suspecting that this practised indignation was routine at this point. He rolled up his sleeves in preparation. This time he didn’t enquire about the bread or cheese and simply enjoyed it for what it was – a good, simple meal.

However, Lafnis didn’t return to her kitchen. She lingered by the table, looking at the Chronicler’s things.

“So this is it then.”

The Chronicler set down his fork, wiping his mouth on his sleeve as he looked at the woman. She seemed almost regretful despite displaying nothing but contempt earlier. Taking a slow drink from his ale, he motioned to the seat opposite him. She didn’t sit immediately, wiping her hands on her apron for a moment before sighing and easing onto the bench.

“I wanted to extend my gratitude…”

“If it’s about the storm -”

The Chronicler hushed her with an impatient wave of his hand.

“No, not just the storm. Though our time has been brief, you’re presence has been much appreciated. You’re quite the remarkable woman, Lafnis. Though you draw little attention to yourself, I can see your gentle touch all around me.”

“I don’t know what you mean.”

“Well, for one, generous Koudi wouldn’t have this establishment running without you.”

“I really don’t-”

The Chronicler laughed. “You needn’t make a play at modesty. I can see in your demeanour that you feel the same. He is but a boy, still lost in the streets of his past dragged down by regret and remorse. He would hardly have the mind or patience for keeping such a place like this operating, let alone in isolated Janogradt. I’m sure your food helps bring some locals in to keep the door open… or closed as is customary for this strange land. And it is your service and presence that keeps him moving from day to day else he’d be consumed in the shadows of his own despair.”

She didn’t respond at first, taking a keen interest in the dirt gathered beneath her short nails.

“I think you read too much, Chronicler,” she said. But it was her turn to call his protests to heel. “The innkeeper and I… we do not share a tangled history. For all his shortcomings, this inn is his. I am merely the help for the time, before the seasons change and I leave on the last of the summer breeze.”

“You’ll be departing?”

“My stay was never intended to be long. This is not my home. I, like you, am merely a guest for a time in these halls.”

The Chronicler leaned back on his bench, crossing his arms in thought.

“And where shall you go next? Back home?”

And Lafnis laughed before abruptly catching herself.

“I fear not.”

“And why is that?”

“Truthfully?” She pondered her response for a moment. “I suppose I don’t know if my home is left for me. My memories of it are so scattered and few I may have already passed through without even noticing.”

“So you’re a Traveller?” he asked.

“Hardly. But I do find that my road takes a stranger path than I would have guessed.”

The Chronicler smiled to himself, shaking his head. Lafnis raised a curious brow.

“What is so humorous?”

“Most people I met, most people in these villages hardly ever travel beyond their own hills let alone their borders,” the Chronicler said, “and here I have two souls who can’t seem to keep to a single one.”

Lafnis shrugged as she stood.

“I suppose it takes all kinds.”

She made towards the kitchen but the Chronicler called out to her once more, opening his satchel. She paused, turning at the sound of his ink pot setting upon the table.

“What are you doing?”

He looked up at her as he shuffled his papers apart, finding and separating the clean sheaves from the written.

“I would be much appreciative if I could hear your tale,” he said, fetching his quill.

“No,” Lafnis said, shaking her head. “I told you I’d play no small part in your chronicles.”

“You said so yourself that those on the roads always have their stories to tell. I ache to know the story of yours and what brought such a curious creature as you so far north to Janogradt.”

“I said heroes and bards have their tales,” Lafnis dismissed. “I have nothing near as interesting as courtly intrigue or daring adventure. A mere woman on the path has but beasts and her safety to worry about. Nothing more and nothing less.”

“What is it that you flee, fair maid?”

She shook her head violently, her face flushed with emotion.

“I told you scribe, I have no story!”

“But so often do words mask truth. I can see something agitates you so, even now as you glimpse back to the solitude and safety of the kitchen. And it certainly can’t be I. You know I am unarmed. I pose you no threat.”

She took a deep breath, her face turning to the floor. For but a beat she almost appeared asleep for she hung so still and unmoving. When she finally looked up, her complexion had returned as did her look of impatience. She crossed the hall, her arms folding before her chest as she slumped before the Chronicler once more.

“Very well, scribe, what is it that you would know?”

“Your story.”

“I was born, I live, I’ll die. Is that all?”

“There is more than that.”

“Is there?”

Lafnis looked over the table, taking a piece of the parchment and holding it before her.

“Is there more to this? A common mercenary fleeing a life of poverty and servitude trying to drink his regret and sorrow away in a far corner of the globe? What chronicle shall you file this beneath? The Lavish Tales of Wintery Janogradt and its Fascinating Peoples?”

“Why do you disparage his life so? Though it may not be the Kinslayer, it has worth in of itself.”

“And that is why you leave today, then?”

The Chronicler couldn’t help but feel he’d been outmanoeuvred in a debate he wasn’t aware he’d even begun.

“I don’t know what you mean.”

Lafnis shook her head, slapping the paper upon the table.

“As I’ve said, there is little value in your ‘truths.’ You’re just a bard with another story looking to amuse and entertain. The truth is that life does not carry the excitement and thrill of the sagas and songs. Our betrayals and weaknesses are such small, petty matters. Take your precious Kinslayer, what of him do you even know?”

“That is the point of my quest,” the Chronicler said, feeling the old frustration return. “The Kinslayer is such a controversial character, shrouded in conflicting reports of enormous generosity and unbelievable cruelty.”

“And given such conflict, how do you hope to even discover the truth? Is it your goal to stop all that you see, asking them if they are this Scarlet Heather in the hopes that the right one will make such a confession?”

“Just because a task is difficult does not make it unworthy.”

Lafnis leaned upon the table, tapping on the collection of stories spread before her.

“Have you sought all the rumours of the Kinslayer? Have you sifted through them in the hopes to catch some pattern or character that presides in all? At the sun’s set, traveller’s will re-purpose their stories, adding their own personal flair or faulty memory to the telling until nothing left of your hero exists. At this point, your Kinslayer no longer survives.”

“That’s not true,” the Chronicler said. “We know he must have killed his kin.”

Lafnis fell silent as she sat back on her bench. But the Chronicler saw the wisdom in his words and continued his thought.

“We can not sacrifice these people to the exaggerations of the storyteller because it makes for good coin about the fire. There can exist their actual deeds along side the mythical retelling. We needn’t live in a world forged by frightful fantasy and unresolved mystery when so much of it exists right before our eyes to see!”

Lafnis didn’t speak for a time. Her arms remained crossed while she shook her head as if to knock her thoughts free from her skull. At long last she sighed and stood.

“Then I shall wish you luck on your quest, master scribe.”

She moved to the door, fetching his travelling staff. The debate had ended and the Chronicler wasn’t even sure who had won. He gathered his supplies, laying them gently into his satchel before tossing it over his shoulder. Lafnis stood waiting with the staff and he took it while giving her a respectful bow of his head.

But as he stepped to the door, he paused.

“I did mean my words. Every one of them. You are a remarkable woman, and I hope the gods bless the stones beneath your feet for wherever they bear you.”

He stepped from the Stone Swan and looked up and down the street of small Talarheim. He took a long breath of its crisp air, watching the tree tops sway gently in the morning breeze. He gathered his cowl tight about him, pulling the hood over his head.

But as his feet moved down the worn steps, he heard the door creaking loudly behind. He turned, surprised to see Lafnis there, tugging the portal closed. She had her thick cloak wrapped about her shoulders and he gave her a questioning look as she slammed the wood and joined him.

“I thought I would walk with you for a spell,” she said. “See you safely out of Talarheim as it were.”

“Are we expecting much danger?”

“Of course not but I figured you’d appreciate the company.”

She looked at him as if daring an objection. But he merely smiled.

“You’re a hard lady, young Lafnis. I can see why the roads hold no concern for you.”

He fell along her side as they made their way past the smithy and tanner houses. For a while, they didn’t speak, listening only to the sounds of the creaking lantern upon the staff’s chain or the groan of the ancient trees in the forest.

At last, it was her that broke the silence between them.

“So what have you heard of the Kinslayer?”

The Chronicler frowned, considering the question.

“Much. More than there is to tell, really.”

“Very well. What do you believe about the Kinslayer?”

That was more difficult and the Chronicler shook his head uncertain of his response.

“I suppose I never gave it much thought. I had hoped to form an opinion once I met him. Though, as the months pass that proposition seems more and more unlikely. But that doesn’t answer your question, does it?

“I guess I expected to find a conflicted individual. So varied are the stories about him that I thought this would reflect on his very person. I don’t hold to such simple concepts as good and evil. Even the war between our mighty Aenir and Vanir demonstrate that the most villainous amongst us are capable of equal measures of bravery too. I don’t doubt that the Kinslayer has killed but that does not make him unique amongst men. An unfortunate state – the world we live in – where the greatest of his crimes is in raising his sword against his on flesh than it is to the innumerable nameless that fill the passing notes of his stories. He is said to be a butcher and hunter of men but it is the murder of his kin that ruins him.

“No, I suspect the Kinslayer has done some wicked deeds. Some truly monstrous actions. Scarlet Heather speaks too much to pillaging, banditry and kidnapping that the stories of terrorized merchant vessels bear far too much weight. I wouldn’t be surprised to learn that the high seas robbery are true. By most account, the Kinslayer is an accomplished sailor. They say he commanded five vessels at one time, manned by all sorts of wicked and terrifying individuals. So fearful were his crews that the moment his symbol raised, the merchant vessels would slam shut their cannon holes and hoist the white flag in the hopes of mercy and pity.

“Perhaps they found it too. Though most tell of the terrific butchery enacted on his victims, I was unable to find any truth to those accounts. But identifying merchants and fleets that had complied and were merely robbed were more numerous. All of them spoke of the fearsome Scarlet Heather with hair as if it were on fire and such fearsome weaponry as to be beyond comprehension. They say he could disarm a man from ten paces away with a mere flick of his wrist. A shot from his crossbow could release a terrible gas that would incapacitate even the hardiest mercenary.

“But he did not rely on bizarre tools alone. He must be incredibly clever. And not just because he is impossible to hunt down. I have heard of a story where he held a whole city ransom over the release of his lieutenant. Through wits and deceit he convinced a free port that he had an entire fleet stationed out in the mists prepared to reduce their pitiful homes to dust if his man wasn’t given to him. One popular telling says that by this time he was coinless and without any vessel of his own. Perhaps it is the wide-eyed wonder of my youth that makes me like that version the most. Even a man as obsessed with veracity as myself can find some enjoyment in the more unbelievable tales.”

He looked at her, wondering if that was enough of a response. When she didn’t speak, he posed his own question.

“And what of you? What have you heard about the Kinslayer?”

“Oh, much the same and much more,” Lafnis said. “Truthfully, I was more fond of the personal stories. So often are people excited to hear the Kinslayer’s exploits. But its the relationships that intrigue me. They say more about the person than some second-hand tale.”

The Chronicler nodded.

“I suppose that would get into the kin slaying, would it not? The issue with character over deeds is so many interpret however they want. One’s rescue is another’s kidnapping. And the more into their history, the harder it is to find any sense beyond the bias of the teller.

“But there is one. His lieutenant, Verga, served him on many adventures. Theirs was an unbreakable friendship that saw them past their earlier days of plunder and looting. Whenever one was in need, the other wasn’t far to be found. But old crew weren’t the only to rub shoulders with the terrifying Scarlet Heather. It is said that adventurers and heroes alike came into his sights. But the names of those wanderers paled to the importance of the Kinslayer himself.

“Which really leaves the matter of the most important deed that Scarlet Heather committed: fratricide. For many recoil at the thought of murdering one’s own brother as if it represented the greatest betrayal known to man. It’s a position I find intriguing, especially since so many of our legends and myths hinge on these very acts. The War of the Gods is little more than a heavenly conflict between kin. Nearly every state has histories of battles for thrones between family. It is so common that one would think it was the nature of man to come into conflict with those closest to him. In fact, few even stop to consider such actions unless it is pointed out to them. Would the Kinslayer’s brother be any more important if he wasn’t referred to as such? For a man who is rumoured to have killed so many, I think not.

“But it is the intrigue and everyone thinks, nay expects, the story to be shocking if it was to become an epitaph.”

“I heard he was quite a piece of work,” Lafnis said. “A tyrant and abuser. A monster in man’s flesh. That the kin slaying was not a crime of dark passion but a mercy upon the land. But for such a grace, the shame of the deed would forever be remember. Nothing could wipe its memory from the people who should have been most relieved by its execution.”

The Chronicler looked at Lafnis curiously.

“And where did you hear that?”

Lafnis shrugged.

“As I said, lots of bards and travellers come through taverns. To remember the face or name to the song would be to differentiate the birds in a flock. After awhile they all just blend together into a singular whole.”

“What else did this bard say?”

“Oh the usual. How clever the Kinslayer was. How brave. How beautiful. The usual.”

“On the matter of kin.”

“Let me think,” Lafnis said. She paused, drawing her cloak tightly about her as she looked up at the clouds. “I believed his name was Poul. Or Paol. Something to that affect. But to understand the son, I was told you first had to understand the father. Forgive my clumsiness, for I am no storyteller but I believe it went something like this…”

Book Review – Untold

I feel the need to defend some of my reading material. Why? Because of my very judgemental brother of course. Not only does he hate everything – he can always defend his point of view by pointing out the obvious (and less obvious) flaws in the book/movie/game/etc. So, even when I come out of a movie thinking geez that was fun, a few minutes discussion with Kevin will leaving me disappointed in the film.

Since he doesn’t read much, books in theory should be safe from his hypercritical views. But it doesn’t seem to work that way. First I struggle to relate the plot of my stories in any manner that doesn’t sound utterly ridiculous. Further, the self-proclaimed God of Taste will on occasion read the book summary online. And that I suppose is really where this post began. With a movie poster for Divergent and a curiosity to know what the story was about.

According to some online summary, Divergent is supposed to be a dystopian future similar to the Hunger Games. Only none of the described problems seem like reasonable problems. How is a government that is characterised as being selfless considered evil? How can people really expect to divide the population into five classes based on personality and not think there will be individuals that do not fit in their system? More importantly what does it matter which personality you have? There is not indication of how these classes integrate into society. It seems silly as many young adult novels do. While I am curious to see if the book is as bad as the summary suggests, I am not quite willing to sacrifice the day required to read it.

UntoldOn the other hand I did read and enjoyed a different young adult novel, Untold by Sarah Rees Brennan. Untold is the sequel to Unspoken (which I think I have mentioned before). The summary: well, in brief it is about a town of wizards divided between the evil side that want to kill people for power and the good side that don’t want to kill anyone. It is set in modern England. So, in some ways I suppose you could compare it to Harry Potter which also explored good and evil and magic in modern times. Certainly both had secret wizards capable of fantastical feats but hidden from the rest of society.

One of the biggest questions raised with Harry Potter was: If magic is so powerful and capable of doing all sorts of things why do wizards have to hide from the rest of society? I don’t think it was ever fully rationalized. I could apply the same question to Untold. The only answer I can find is that Wizards are not capable of just anything with their power and that for most of them their power is confined to the small English town through tradition and design. Certainly everyone (or nearly so) in the town is aware of the concept of wizards, it is accepted but not much discussed (on account of death being connected to power). The wizards themselves have a strong connection to the town (it was built expressly for them hundreds of years earlier) and desire to continue ruling it. But still I ask, why there? Why can they not do magic elsewhere? And if they can, why do they not rule the world?

While the main characters are still in school, it is not the driving force behind the books. Untold does not have a Hogwarts, it has an entire village – kept isolated by magic and wizards. Very few people seem to move into the town and few seem to leave. This seems reasonable for small towns and certainly builds that insular world of Sorry-in-the- Vale.

Ok, I can see where the story sounds a bit silly and I really cannot explain it away. The characters however, are really what have sold me on the series. They are teenagers – a point against them, but in some ways they are not real teenagers. First their banter is far more interesting to listen to. Second, although they can be very moody, several are spunky, straight-forward and optimistic. It gives the cast a good balance as there is always someone there to call out the particularly emotional ones and give them a good kick in the pants.

I like the connections between people. Families are not perfect in this story, even the one example of a seemingly perfect family has to deal with real issues of trust and potential divorce. There is a range of families and different relationships expressed in the book. Some parents are absent. Some parents don’t care for their offspring, other parents seem to care more for their nephew than their own son. The main character is not your typical orphan. She is deeply connected to her family and struggles when they show how human even her parents are. Even in the conservative English village there is a hint of diversity with the main character and her Japanese ancestry; with characters exploring their sexuality. All of these conflicts are well done and I think they remind the reader that not everyone is the same and you cannot judge people just by their appearances.

So, what is the point of this lengthy (for me), incoherent ramble? Well first and most importantly: Untold, the second book in the Lynburn Legacy, is a good read. I liked it. I would recommend it, particularly to those enjoying young adult. And even better, it doesn’t have vampires, werewolves or zombies. Second, it is probably a blessing that my brother doesn’t read much. It keeps him from tainting everything I like.