Author Archives: Kait McFadyen

About Kait McFadyen

I am a partially employed Canadian science teacher with visions of grand travel and incredible adventures. When not immersed in work I maintain a small backyard garden, where I try to protect my crops of corn, tomatoes and other vegetables from the neighbourhood wildlife. The all-important library, my source of entertainment and discourse, is a comfortably short walk away.

The Breaker Rig – Part 1

Well people, the truth is I have not read anything of late. I have traveled a little, worked a little and written a little. But I have not been reading. So, to follow in the footsteps of others, I am going to foist my short story upon you.

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Sophie’s stomach lurched upward as she gripped the edge of her seat with white knuckles. Her knees curled tightly around the chipped, hard edge of the two-person bench she blessedly shared with no one. With strained determination Sophie stared straight ahead.

The dark red carriage-car shuddered. Worn wooden benches shook against wrought-iron feet bolted to the floor. Glass windows rattled and the entire conveyance dropped suddenly before settling at its new altitude.

‘Mama, mama!’ The child on the opposing bench giggled. ‘Look. I can see trees.’

‘Indeed. See the ribbon of blue? That is the Kalska River. Can you spot any boats?’

From the corner of her eye, Sophie saw twin-braids bob as the child shifted in her seat. The girl pressed her snub nose to the glass. Bracelets of small dangling charms clinked as the child’s hands were placed to either side of her face. Her breath fogged the window in a gentle aura spreading out from the girl’s face, no doubt obscuring her view of the land below.

Sophie fretted her bottom lip between her teeth. The carriage-car and its collection of passengers held steady. Beneath the hum of conversation, there was the gentle whirl of the steam-powered engine propelling their transport north. Very cautiously, she relaxed the muscles in her hands. Gradually, she eased their hold so the edge was not as painfully biting.

‘Incredible is it not?’ The mother said directing her warm brown eyes to Sophie. ‘To believe we will reach Dawn City in only one day’s flight from White River!’

Sophie grimaced. ‘Air carriages are certainly much faster.’

‘Indeed, it would have taken us a week by steam ship. My husband made the journey this spring. They make you bring so many supplies when you move North. The Territory Guard are quite particular when it comes to immigrants. Every man heading to the gold fields must bring enough to last the winter. Inconvenient for those who will only prospect during the summer.’

The air carriage jostled in some unseen breeze. Sophie’s stomach knotted.

The woman continued to chatter, oblivious to the turbulence. ‘As family, we of course don’t need to bring as much. Besides I hear you can find anything you want in Dawn City, just as you could in the major cities farther south. Yes, Yuki, that is the river and the trees. No, child, it will be some hours yet before we arrive.’

The girl twisted on her seat in a manner Sophie assumed was designed to garner a better view of the earth. The earth that was so far from them at present.

‘You must also be meeting someone,’ the woman prompted.

Sophie pried her jaws apart enough to answer. ‘My sister.’

‘Of course! How lovely it is to have siblings in other parts of the country. I was always so delighted to visit my older sister, Suki. She married and moved back east; to the coastal capital Bington. What an adventure it was to cross the entire continent; it had such varied scenery to enjoy. I was fascinated by the wide sweeping plains, so flat you could see for days in any direction. That is the spread of our family: coast to coast. Of course, we didn’t have these marvellous creations when I was younger. Just regular rail-carriages running on tracks.’

‘I like rail-trains.’

P1040327‘Naturally, there is much to like about an entire string of carriages speeding along a well laid track. I will concede the level of comfort in the sleeper and dining cars is far superior to our limited confines. But this view’–the woman gestured to the window–‘is incomparable. This is like an adventure you would read in the papers. Oh, how exciting it is to be part of history. Is this your first time North? Of course, it must be.’

The woman nodded at Sophie’s rigid posture. ‘Well, welcome. I know, I know. I too am new to the North, but I can just feel it. Dawn City is going to be wonderful.’

‘Mama, what’s that?’

The woman shifted on the bench–sweeping her skirts to the side–she half stood to peer over the head of her child at the distant ground. Sophie saw the carpet bags stowed carefully under the seat. There was also a food hamper, likely obtained from their hotel in White River just for this portion of the journey. Sophie’s stomach gurgled softly, torn between nausea and hunger.

‘That appears to be some rapids. Yes, I do remember your father mentioning something of the kind in his letter home. They have cables; I believe they help the ships navigate this stretch. Slow going, another reason why it is better to travel by air than water.’

Sophie thought of her own letter, neatly folded in a similar carpet bag stored at her feet. It was well creased now. Only two months old and already it was showing signs of age.

‘What brought your sister North?’ The woman resumed her position demurely on the opposite bench. Everything was proper about her appearance, Sophie noted while keeping her eyes from roaming.

The brown hat with its fabricated flowers was pinned to a large, thick bun of dark, glossy black hair. The colour reminded Sophie of Anika, though her sister hated long hair. She complained it took too much work to keep nice. The woman’s dress had the structured bodice and military cut reflecting a war that raged across an ocean. The skirts were full but clearly lacked the extra crinoline layers favoured by fashionable women in the large southern cities. Sophie felt drab and poor in her faded brown cotton dress.

‘Did she move with her husband, or…’

‘She had a letter from our father,’ Sophie replied keeping her voice steady and factual. Anika received a letter and then was suddenly gone. ‘He found his way to Dawn City and started working a gold-field.’ At least that was what Sophie remembered. She didn’t have that letter anymore, only the echo of Anika’s words two days before she was gone.

‘Claim, the term they use is a claim. Though, I suppose in a way the gold is harvested from the ground. A family reunion, that is wonderful! I am certain you are most excited and nervous too no doubt. We give up so much to support our families. As exciting and adventuresome as it is I confess I was hesitant to leave everything familiar for the great unknown. It will be worth it though, when we are a family again.’

Yes she was going to be with her family too. She was going to see Anika again. Sophie thought of her sister, of Anika’s large brown eyes and energetic personality. Anika loved to move. She hated to sit still. Soon, they would be together again. The tension in Sophie’s shoulders eased. Anika was always good at taking care of things. Everything would be sorted once she got to Dawn City.

‘Sadly my husband is at the claim now. It is not so easy to move between the various claims and the town. There are no air carriages, only unkempt dirt roads.’ The woman sighed. ‘It seems like he left an age past, though of course I know it has only been a matter of months. I do worry though.’

Sophie watched as the woman’s fingers rubbed absently at the red bead charm on her left wrist. She recognized the worn protection charm. Everyone had one or something similar. It was one of the first charms attached to a child’s bracelet. It was a charm to keep the wearer safe; it offered general protection from the small accidents in life. There were other more specific charms. Sophie wore one to protect against disease and falling. Anika had another charm to protect her from sharp blades as she was prone to nicking her hands in the kitchen.

‘Mining is such dangerous work,’ the woman sighed.

‘I thought they were plucking gold from river beds.’ Anika had been interested in the gold discovery from the moment the stories appeared in the papers. Anika, who hated to read, was inspired to pour over the broad sheets twice daily for any scrap of information she could find. Any hint of gold or even of the far North was enough to still her restless body for a few minutes.

‘If only it were that easy. I suppose it must have started that way. Certainly the papers described the first discoveries as happenstance: gold nuggets glittering from beneath the creek’s trickle of water and awaiting discovery. If the gold was only found in rivers and streams then I am certain we wouldn’t be heading North now. No, I am sure all the gold hunters would have already stripped every once from the land. Indeed, there is nought by dust left in the waters and little enough of that.’

‘But Dawn City is growing. Anika, my sister, said it was a bustling place filled with – well everything. Tons of people still line the docks in Chesico to catch a ship.’

‘Is that where you are from? Chesico is a beautiful city. I love the spectacular views of the bay you get from the surrounding heights.’

Sophie nodded absently. She didn’t want to think of her home, now so impossibly far away. Sophie had never left Chesico before. Absently, Sophie’s fingers found the small silver charm. The precise strokes spelt the city’s name.

‘Is there no gold left in the North?’ Sophie wondered.

‘Oh, it is still there,’ the woman said leaning back in her seat. Her gaze drifted for a moment to a distant spot over Sophie’s shoulder. ‘It is buried deep within the land. It is a game now, trying to find it and then extracting it. That is what a claim is: a section of land leased from the government on which the hopeful dig for their riches.’

Sophie frowned. ‘It sounds like a lot of work.’

‘Dangerous work too.’ A shadow passed over the woman’s features. ‘There have been accidents on the claims and moving between the claims and town. The North is wild country filled with all sorts of challenges. Freezing cold, long winters, wolves, bears…’ The woman cast a sidelong look at her daughter, still happily peering out the window at a never ending ocean of wavering pine trees.

‘There are charms,’ Sophie said. ‘Protection against cold and wild animals.’

The woman shook her head. ‘Charms might help but the digging for gold… there is danger in the process. The mechanicals they use, well no one is entirely certain how well charming and mechanicals work together.’

‘Charms only enhance,’ Sophie said, the words of her teacher flooding through her mind. ‘They are a way to direct our actions and our futures. Charms have been sung into existence for thousands of years. If mechanicals fail, then how can we know it was a result of the charm and not the contraption?’

‘Spoken like a charmer.’ The woman smiled at Sophie. ‘I always thought charmers were a mysterious breed, cloistered away in churches and low ceilinged shops.’

Sophie laughed weakly. ‘There is nothing particularly mysterious about what I do.’

‘You must have a beautiful voice. I always wished I was better at singing. Yuki, though, has potential.’ The woman turned a fond look on her child.

A lull fell between them. Only now Sophie wished her companion was busy chatting. The constant stream of words had been a good distraction for all the uncertainties that lay before her. Sophie shifted in her seat. The cushioning had worn to threads. It did nothing to soften the hard wooden.

She could feel her eyes drawn to the window. The deceptive beauty of an azure sky lay beyond the stuffy confines of their carriage-car. With effort, Sophie resisted the draw of her thoughts out of the carriage and the immediate future. Instead she thrust her arm awkwardly forward and plastered a smile on her face. ‘Sophie Tammerik,’ she said. ‘Pleased to meet you.’

‘Mrs. Lynda Yamata and my daughter Yuki. The pleasure is mine.’

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‘We are falling!’ a passenger shouted.

‘Of course not, you old fool. We are descending. Just go back to sleep and everything will be fine.’

Sophie’s mind estimated the damage that would be done to the carriage-car should the two altitude balloons release all their gas without pause. Would the main bladder hold enough air to slow their descent? Would they crash in a splintering mess of metal and wood and bone?

‘We must be almost there, for I am sure those are cabins I can see,’ Mrs. Yamata said softly.

‘Look Mama, there are houses and streets and…’

‘And what my dear?’

‘Trees and water and rocks. There are piles of rocks, big ones.’

‘Ladies and Gentleman, please hold onto your hats we are approaching the platform for Dawn City.’

The voice rose above the general chatter of the carriage-car, stilling conversation to a low hum.

‘Who was that?’ Yuki asked twisting in her seat.

‘That was the conductor,’ Sophie supplied grateful for the brief distraction. ‘There is a bronze horn half way down the carriage. It connects to a mouth piece in the cab perched atop the car. The conductor, navigator and propulsion engineer are up there flying the air-carriage.’

‘Oh, have you been on an air-carriage before?’ Mrs. Yamata was just as calm as before.

Sophie shook her head. ‘I studied the model during boarding. They have an extremely accurate miniature of the air-carriage, complete with three canvass balloons and panelled interior. It is a superior charm,’ she added in appreciation for the craftsmanship that went into making the model.

Pressure built up in Sophie’s ears reminding of where she was. She moved her jaw in an attempt to alleviate the discomfort. As her heart rate increased, Sophie scrambled to focus on something beyond the end of her short life. She hummed the charm for general protection. It was old and familiar: a child’s song. She had not actively sung its chords for some time now; her focus was on more advanced charms. The familiar notes loosed her tongue, until she was softly singing the words that accompanied the music.

The final drop slowed. With a jarring thump, the air-carriage landed.

‘Ladies and Gentleman,’ came the conductor’s brisk voice. ‘We have arrived at our final destination, Dawn City. Ensure you have collected all luggage before disembarking.’ Pause. ‘And thank you for flying with Northwind Transit.’

Sophie stood on shaky legs. Around her people unbuttoned coats and collected their bags. The car was quickly becoming hot and stuffy now they had reached ground-level. She followed the shuffling chatting crowd off the conveyance and into a clearing.

White and pink wildflowers added colour to the carpet of weeds which spread out to the boarder of wavering pine trees. The air was brisk and filled with foreign smells; tree resin, wood smoke, and crushed grass. It was different from the city, though not unpleasantly so.

The single platform was crowded with laughing and shouting people. Passengers, in crumpled clothes and wilted hats wobbled forward. Their movements were hampered by arms loaded with bags and packages. Townspeople, Sophie guessed, stood welcome before them. They were different from the travellers. Their clothing was rougher, dirtier and muted in colour. They stood with causal confidence watching the spectacle of new arrivals.

All around her, the constant throb of chatter was punctuated by shouts of joy as excited greetings were exchanged. Sophie searched the waiting faces for some familiar signs. She felt her stomach slowly sink as Yuki squealed and rushed forward into the waiting arms of an older man. Beneath the wide brim of his dusty hat, Sophie saw the scraggly edges of a beard a moment before the man embraced Mrs. Yamata.

P1040256Caught by the crowd, which had grown too large for the rough plank platform, Sophie spun trying to orientate herself. Behind her was the air-carriage, the late afternoon sunlight glinting off brass fittings and glass windows. A crew of uniformed workers were busy cleaning the interior and making ready for tomorrow’s departure.

Before her, along the western edge of the clearing was the station house. It was a log-structure, presumably made from the local pine. The round logs had been cut with notches at the corners and the town’s name had been carved into a sign that hung over the wide front stairs. The covered porch wrapped around the building, the only building. Where was the town?

Sophie’s eyes followed the shuffling mass of people, who appeared to be heading around the station house rather than into the building. Readjusting the handles of her carpet bag, Sophie followed. Though it seemed unlikely an entire city could be hidden by a single structure.

As she moved, Sophie checked each female face in view. Could she have forgotten the shape of her sister’s eyes or the pull of her mouth? Had it only taken a few months for Anika to become a stranger? None of the people in sight looked like Anika and certainly none stepped forward to greet her.

Around the back of the station house, was another platform that jutted out over the steep slope of a hill. From glimpses she caught between the trees, Sophie could see painted buildings at the base of the hill. She had not yet arrived in Dawn City. Hopefully the city would be more modern than the station house.

As she waited with the crowd, a heavy cable pulled a large basket to the edge of the platform. The metal wheel clinked to a stop and the man inside the basket called for people to load up after paying the required fee.

‘What is that?’ Sophie wondered, not realizing she had spoken until her neighbour answered.

‘The cable-basket,’ the older woman replied. ‘It ferries people between the town and the station. There are actually two. One will currently be loading people at the bottom, while this one loads them at the top. Then the cables will pull one up and the other down.’

‘How do they know when to move the baskets?’

‘The ferryman there,’ the woman said pointing a bent finger at the man collecting fees. ‘He rings a bell when everyone is loaded. There is a third man in the powerhouse operating the cables.’

Sophie swallowed. ‘Is that the only way down the mountain?’

‘You could always walk. I hear there is a narrow path that winds its way down, somewhere over there.’ The woman waved a dismissive hand back towards the station house. Sophie frowned and bit back her next comment. Instead she watched the full basket bob and bounce as it started its descent.

It was a slow process. Stuck in the middle of her basket, Sophie swayed and rocked with the constant movement. She bumped into the people around her, unable to keep her balance. While most were too dazed by their first ride in a cable-basket, several of those she assumed were townspeople scowled at her.

Welcome to Dawn City, Sophie thought glumly. The man standing with his arms crossed over his barrel chest nudged her away from him. They were more than halfway down the hill when the trees thinned and the city came into full view. Unfortunately, Sophie could see little past the tall shoulders of the other passengers.

In the small spaces that appeared between swaying people Sophie caught sight of buildings, streets and the glitter of light on water. What she did see was not evidence of a bustling city like Chesico, whose streets were paved with stone. Chesico’s downtown had buildings rising four and six stories tall. Dawn City looked small. It did not look any bigger as Sophie was pushed from the basket.

From the smaller platform, Sophie left the cable-basket and entered into Dawn City proper. People and wagons shuffled along packed dirt streets. Individuals with determined looks stood beside massive packs and crates. A year’s supply of rations piled together blocked the street to wagons. The raised boardwalks on either side were crowded with the better dressed and cleaner looking members of society. Men in dark trousers and white shirts watched carts of goods and people pass. Women in long skirts and wide-brimmed hats fanned themselves as they chatted with each other.

Timber buildings were painted in a myriad of different colours with garish trim around the windows and doors. False fronts made the buildings closer to the river appear taller and more imposing than the structures hidden behind.

Sophie walked in a bewildered daze through the streets. The press of bodies seemed to close in on her. It had looked so small from her position in the cable-basket. Yet walking from one full hotel to the next made the town feel expansive.

Her carpet bag grew heavy and banged awkwardly against her shins. The smell of bread and grilled meat wafted through the air causing her stomach to grumble loudly. How long had it been since she ate? Looking at the sun was of little help. The orange ball of light sat low on the horizon, a swollen orb that refused to surrender its place in the sky.

Fatigue and worry pulled at Sophie’s nerves. Her fingers played over the charms on her wrist. She needed help and rest; food and shelter. She turned down another smaller side street and spied the vibrant pink building. The fourth hotel Sophie had stopped at in search of a room had recommended the boarding house. She read the pealing orange letters painted on the side of the building: Patal’s Palace Lodgings.

Sophie rubbed the charm on her wrist as she climbed the wide front stairs towards the dark opening. She smiled at the miniature house nailed to the right of the front door. The carefully constructed replica of the boarding house shared the same garish paint job. It was also chipped and peeling. A nail had loosened and the miniature tilted on its perch just as the boarding house listed to the left.

The wide front door hung open. Inside the dim interior the front hall was painted golden yellow. The floor was scuffed green painted wood.

‘Hello,’ a young man said. Blue eyes sparkled curiously at her. ‘Are you new here?’

‘I hope so,’ Sophie replied licking dry lips. ‘Do you know where I can find the proprietor?’

‘I think Ms. Patal is in the kitchen,’ he waved his hand towards the back of the building, the charms dangling from his wrist jingled musically.

At the end of the narrow hall was the kitchen. Aromas of curried stew wafted out. Three young girls moved purposefully around the space from work counters to sink. The clatter of dishes and pots filled the air. Sophie salivated as leftover food was put away and dirty plates were cleaned for the night. At the centre of the dance was a tall woman dressed in bright pink and gold. Her long black hair fell in a single braid down her back. She wore a long sleeveless tunic over a split skirt.

P1040265‘Hello, hello,’ she sang spotting Sophie. ‘Welcome to Patal’s Palace.’

Dislodging herself from the kitchen, Ms. Patal flowed toward her. ‘A recently arrived adventurer? What has brought you to our magical land?’

‘I have come after my sister.”

Ms. Patal smiled. ‘Come to join your sister?’

‘To find my sister,’ Sophie amended.

‘So you will not be lodging with her.’

Sophie shook her head. ‘I … I don’t know if she is in town. I think she said she was working a gold-field–I mean a claim.’

‘Of course, of course. No doubt she will be here to greet you shortly. Until then you need a place to stay, yes? Well, let me think. I don’t know if I have any rooms left, summer is a very busy season for us…’

‘Where else can I go?’

‘There is no place like Patal’s Palace,’ the landlady sang. ‘I have just the thing. Follow me.’

Ms. Patal lead Sophie up three flights of stairs to a room stuffed in a small corner of the attic. The roof sloped. The bed creaked and sagged. The window was permanently shut in its orange frame. Atop the chest of drawers was a chipped ceramic washbasin and mismatched jug.

The landlady smiled as she gestured exuberantly at the room. ‘Meals are included: breakfast and dinner. The cost is paid by week.’ She looked expectantly at Sophie as she noted the price.

Sophie sputtered. ‘You want how much? For this miniscule space! I could easily get three times the space back in Chesico.’

Ms. Patal’s smile faded. ‘We are not in Chesico, now are we? If you don’t want the room, I am sure someone else does.’

‘No, no,’ Sophie hurried. She had already been turned away from several hotels. ‘I will pay.’

‘Don’t worry, I am sure we can fit the rest of your supplies somewhere,’ Ms. Patal said as she left.

‘I don’t have any other supplies,’ Sophie told the room. ‘And that is a good thing. I am glad Dawn City isn’t any bigger. I don’t think I could afford to stay here another week.’ She moved over to the window. ‘Don’t worry Anika, it shouldn’t take more than a day to find you. Then we can be on our way.’

Slipping out of her shoes, Sophie curled up on the bed. She let the fatigue of the journey pull her into the sweet oblivion of sleep.

Outside, the sun skimmed along the horizon. The sky dimmed but never fully darkened even Sophie drifted away in the realm of dreams.

Forged in Blood – Book Review

Image from the internet of the book cover.

Image from the internet of the book cover.

The Emperor’s Edge series is seven books long – sort of. Book six was split into two books, literally called Forged in Blood I and Forged in Blood II. Of course, then the author, Lindsay Buroker, returned to the world and characters with at least two more books, but they are not part of the main series arc.

I want to start by saying that I really liked the Emperor’s Edge series. I think the writing and in particular the characters were really strong. I was fond of the way Buroker dealt with sexism in the world. Yes, there was a role for women. Unlike so many stories that have oppressed females tied to hearth and home, women’s role was that of businesswomen. They were the owners and managers of companies. The main villainous female wanted to create some powerful bank that would rule the world through its economy! While women are not part of the military base, a significant exclusion for a culture based around fighting and war, they were part of the city’s law-enforcement (granted that was a recent development in the world). I liked the way the author dealt with racism with her use of other cultures in that world.

While many would argue the dialogue used by the characters is not authentic to everyday speech, I would say: excellent! Have you listened to people talk to each other? It usually very boring and highly repetitive. Fortunately the author was far more creative in her use of language. The expletives may be a bit silly at times, but overall I really liked the character’s speech patterns. I enjoyed the witty, fast-paced banter. I actually liked that the author used words even I am not familiar with. I think using a bigger vocabulary than your audience does is a positive attribute. The words are easily understood through context and they have the potential to expand the vocab of the reader (or not as the reader chooses).

Most importantly I really liked the characters. Amaranthe, our feisty female lead was the only voice that was the same throughout the entire series. Buroker made an excellent decision to have the second voice in each book a different important character, a member of Amaranthe’s group of misfits. The different perspectives provided an engaging second window into the characters. It made for a very interesting read as we dealt with different perspectives and side quests.

P1050593That said, there is much of the world I didn’t like. I really am not a fan of the alien technology. I cannot say way, other than it feels so foreign (hehe, alien – get it!?) and disconnected from the rest of the world. I also am not a fan of the magic. They talk about it as though it is a skill, a Science, to be learned. Yet at the same time you seem to be either born with this ability or not. Further, magic can do anything it is seemingly limitless. Perhaps it is this lack of clear limitations to the magic and how it works that rubs me the wrong way. Or perhaps I am too akin to the Turgonians and their anti-magic prejudices. While I may not be able to articulate my dislike for the magic in this otherwise interesting, steampunk world, I was not a fan.

I suspect that my disinclination for the magic and aliens is related to the apparent power creep that happened over the series. As the heroes got stronger, the author felt the need to have bigger and scarier villains. Hence, the incongruous use of alien technology (the aliens have been gone for 50 000 years – the vast amount of time did not help endear me to these ancient space going peoples) and unrefined magic systems. Yes, it made the opponents more deadly, but was that really necessary?

P1050611While I liked the base concept of the last two books, I found the story steps more clichéd and less interesting to read than the earlier books. I feel that these last two books suffered from too much trying to happen. There was a lot of political manoeuvring and downright intimidation. Even the author struggled to find ways for our lovable band of misfits to stay relevant in the dramatically changing political landscape.

Further the introduction of Starcrest and his family, clearly characters from another story in the same world, also pulled attention away from the main caste. It was rather late in the series (which was in theory wrapping up) to have new faced shoved in taking centre stage. I have not read the other books related to Starcrest and his wife, so I was not inclined to love their ruthless inclusion into the rest of the story. I am sure their introduction could have been handled with a bit more tact.

P1050593If nothing else, if the author really wanted to finish on such a grand massive war stage, then don’t force the team together for smaller side quests. Have them split up and integrated into the larger fight. Instead, we had some strange struggle between our familiar core of main characters, bouncing about rather haphazardly, and this revolutionary plot occurring at the same time. It was messy. As a result, the author created smaller problems for our loveable main heroes to overcome. Unfortunately, mind controlling the assassin was silly. Blaming and burying Amaranthe in guilt for disastrous results of events largely outside her control was a bit forced. Books death would have been predictable, if I had been thinking about it in any way. Really, what other character could you kill off by the wise, old man; the voice of learning, experience, and sage advice? He is expendable for that clichéd emotional pull at the end to show that even our noble heroes must make the ultimate sacrifice (with one of the more tangential character’s deaths). When the rest of the series had felt so new and engage, the end was a trifle flat.

Conclusion to this seven book journey: I liked it. Even with all the flaws at the end, I thought it was fun, highly enjoyable read. I prefer earlier books to the later ones. This is largely because the earlier books have less alien technology and I can more easily ignore the magic. The later books rely too heavily on both these elements for my tastes. But the characters are compelling and strongly written. I would recommend the series, at least to the conclusion of the main arc. I am not yet convinced revisiting the world was the best choice, or one that will result in me getting the books.

Age of Adeline – movie review

This image belongs to the owners of the film and its distribution rights - not me.

This image belongs to the owners of the film and its distribution rights – not me.

It has been a terribly long time since I posted. I apologize. There have been many reasons. I had password issues that meant I was unable to log onto the blog for a couple of months. I have been travelling (as Kevin has already mentioned). I have been busy living in Japan and so have consumed little media (certainly little worth comment) and I have been a little lazy. Well, I am back and while I do not make promises to be regular I will certainly try to do better.

The first thing I would like to review is a movie. It is not a new movie. In fact I watched it in August while on a 14 hour flight from Japan to Tokyo.

I knew practically nothing about The Age of Adeline when I selected from the limited pool of available movies. Whatever I might have thought it would be about (something through time based on the costume clips), it wasn’t. It was however, surprisingly good. A movie that I really enjoyed enough that I have actually watched it again.

The Age of Adeline was released in April 2015 to moderate reviews – apparently. I was just looking this up on the internet. Sometimes it is best to go into a film with as little information as possible. It certainly worked to my advantage for this one. The movie tells the story of Adeline, born January 1, 1908. Through an accident and science-magic she stops appearing to age when she is 29 years old. The story is mostly told from the present day with a few flashbacks to various points in her life. It is a romance in the classic, predictable way of romances. However, knowing how it is going to end does not spoil the journey, at least for me.

What I liked about this Sleeping Beauty-esq tale was the voice of the film. Not literally the man who did the voice-over exposition at the start and end of the movie, although I liked that choice. It was the feel. I liked the costumes, the cinematography, the way the characters conversed, and the flow of the story. I suppose I liked the clean, simple tale of life that had nothing to do with massive explosions, overly dramatic moments or superheroes. Perhaps it was the change that appealed most to me as other people didn’t seem to enjoy the film as much as I did.

This image is also from the movie and not owned by me.

This image is also from the movie and not owned by me.

I thought the story of Adeline Bowman to be interesting. It may not have touched on her past as much as I would have liked, but I think it hit all the key moments. I also enjoyed those small moments that connected past and present. For example when she is attending a New Year’s Eve party at a fancy hotel and looking at photos on the wall, which include her with a different group of people some fifty or sixty years earlier. She was a classy character and I found Blake Lively’s soft-spoken performance compelling. I liked the costume choices and the touch of old that even the modern Adeline incorporated into her wardrobe. Visually, the film was appealing.

The rest of the cast was also engaging. Adeline’s daughter was the most interesting relationship and unfortunately the weakest. It would have been interesting to explore more of the hardships of watching your child age as you do not. Though they did try to do some interesting things between the characters, it was not the greatest strength of the film. After all this was a romance. As such it focused mostly on the present day love interest of Ellis Jones and the older love interest of William Jones.

This is not my image and I do not own it.

This is not my image and I do not own it.

Yes, those two are related as father and son – one of the more … awkward moments. Though no one seems to really make much of a deal that William had been ready to propose to Adeline long before he married Ellis’ mother. I recognize the use of this sort of relationship (father and son both falling in love with the same ageless woman) was done in order to move the plot forward. It was used to force Adeline to face her own life and choices. Still I thought it a bit much that Adeline’s Prince Charming was the son of the man who wanted to marry her some 45-ish years earlier. I suppose it did add for an interesting exploration of William’s character and whether he was still happy with his choices after so much time had passed.

The Age of Adeline was a nice story. I really enjoyed watching and would recommend it as a good, sweet romance.

Murder of Mages by Marshall Ryan Maresca

Book cover - borrowed from the internet.

Book cover – borrowed from the internet.

I confess, I bought five books before leaving for Japan. This is the fifth and final of my purchases. So what happened to the others? Well, apparently I forgot to do a write up about the first book – which was completely uninspiring so you didn’t miss anything. The second book was too terrible to admit I read. Books three and four were good – but belong to the Emperor’s Edge Series, which I am certain I have already commented on (and I might again when I finish the series). This brings us to book five.

After some terrible reads (books 1 & 2 of my 5 acquisitions), this was good. It was surprisingly good. The story at first glances seems to be a collection of tropes or clichés. Two inspectors disliked by their collegues, take on the devious criminal serial killer in a high-stakes game of cat and mouse. Or something like that. The world, presents as very Victorian with elements of Sherlock Holmes and there is magic.

Ok, now that I have completely turned you off the story, let me say – “Really, it is good.” It is well written and the strength comes from the characters. The two leads are Satrine Rainey and Minox Welling, Inspectors Third Class and newly made partners. In a twist, Satrine is the mother of two girls of teenage years. Her husband, a city Inspector, recently had an accident while on duty that has left him in a vegetative state. He cannot speak or move and needs constant care. Desperate to provide a living wage for her family and protect her daughters from the cruelty of the world Satrine manipulates her way into the position of Inspector with the city’s constabulary. She may not have a background in police work, but she is far from incapable. Trained to be an Intelligence Agent for the country, Satrine has skills. She is also smart, assertive, but not without faults. She is a strong female character.

P1050488Welling is the mage – an open secret in his family and at work. He is a thinker and pieces together information to create a whole and logical picture. He is smart, flawed, and not an orphan. He comes from a very large family all of whom serve the city in some fashion – most with the constabulary.

The third most important character is the villain. He is drive, delusional, dedicated and precise. His descent into madness or at least into murder is well explained and understandable. It make sense – and that is crucial when it comes to creating a strong plot. There is enough conflict from the rest of the caste to showcase the flaws in the characters. But it is not one sided. Yes, the other inspectors don’t like Satrine – the first female inspector. They certainly like her less when her duplicity is brought to life. However, despite that, they respect her courage and determination. There is grudging respect given towards the end. It provides balance, keeping the story from being comic-bookish. There are no clear black and whites – except the murder, even understanding his motivations he is still very guilty.

P1050292The world seems to pull from classic Victorian fantasy. However it does so with grace and elegance. More specifically, it does what all Victorian Fantasy should do – the author has built their own world. Any discrepancies to history are neatly explained away as this is a different world. The world seems solid, but simple. It doesn’t have the depth of history (at least that sense of history) I felt when reading Death of a Necromancer by Martha Wells. However, the author has done a good job of creating a city that functions logically within it world. Maradaine seems like a real place.

The use of magic is my least favourite aspect. I don’t like the Circles, the cloistered private organizations all mages are supposed to belong to. I don’t like that magic is an inherent ability with one’s self. But since everything else was enjoyable to read I won’t complain to greatly on this one aspect.

A Murder of Mages is a great read. It is a solid plot, set in a detailed world with compelling characters. It has good pacing, rational progression and hits just the right note with the dialogue. I really enjoyed this book and look forward to reading Marshall Ryan Maresca’s next offering.

Charmingly Charmed

Well folks, it is nearing the end of June and the beginning of my Grand Adventure. I will shortly be flying off to Japan to soak up the  cultural differences while pretending to teach English to children. It will be … different from my normal job. But this is post is not a speculation on what is to come in my uncertain future, rather it is (likely) my last book review – for a while at least. I don’t know how much I will be reading in Japan – nor do I know when I will once again be connected to the internet…

Book Cover - taken from the internet.

Book Cover – taken from the internet.

I digress. I placed my order over a week ago for a book entitled Charming by Elliott James. If I wasn’t so suspicious about the Main Branch of the Public Library, I should have known their reluctance in lending me the novel came not from malice but a desire to spare me the necessity of reading it. Charming is not a deliciously bad book, but is a long way from good.

My problem started early with the first person narrative. I am not fond of first persons who talk to their audience. I am not fond of lengthy exposition that is written in the most mundane manner.

John Charming was trained as a Knight to hunt and kill monsters from fairytale (and every other sort of mythical legend). Sadly, (for him) he was kicked out of his order when it became apparent John was also a werewolf (one of the abominations to be hunted). His name reflects his families link to all the Prince Charmings of Fairytales.The book begins with John working in a pub when a stunning blond and Vampire enter. The author tries way too hard to be cutesy with his quips, clichés and chapter titles. Sadly, the writing lacks enough depth to produce anything beyond bland.

The narrative commences with a bold declaration that all magic is real and around us we have just been spelled into not seeing it. As set ups go this is neither terrible nor original. Unfortunately, I have read better. Free Agent does a good job of the Fairytale world – playing with Fairy Godfathers (and Godmothers), wicked step-mothers, Charming Princes, the whole works. The world has everything – every monster, mythical creature and fey to have been imagined. As such, there is nothing defining about this world. It works very hard at being grounded in reality, while dealing solely with the supernatural aspects – a contradiction perhaps? There is nothing particularly wrong with writing about werewolves and vampires (besides being ubiquitous). I have certainly read any number of ridiculous supernatural fluff. Perhaps this is why I found Charming to lack any real charm.

As I said the world has anything and everything, so there was nothing original about it. The explanation for why we normal humans don’t see the supernatural is a bit silly. There is a spell woven over all humans to ignore anything that doesn’t fit with our conception of reality. A spell that is apparently breaking down, while the supernatural elements grow stronger around us. I have read explanations along similar veins before – some done more successfully. By picking up an urban fantasy, I am already committing to the idea that weird and unexplained things could be happening around me. I don’t need my author to explain why I haven’t actually seen any of this with my own to eyes – it detracts from the story and breaks my suspension of disbelief. In fact the author has just done the opposite of his intended – he has made me even more aware of how ridiculous his world is.

Many people would surely enjoy the very light, mindless read that is Charming. I thought it would be good fun. Instead I found myself working at finishing the book (and skimming more and more as I rushed towards the promised end). Not surprisingly this is book one and as you can guess from my lack lust review, I will not be looking for the next novel in the series.

Oh, two this of interest did cross my mind as I was reading. 1) Apparently there is a lot of interest in old Norse mythology as the Blond was yet another Valkyrie to pop up in my readings. 2) The author really is fascinated by women’s hips as a defining physical character trait (at least for the first few females we meet).

Delia’s Shadow

So, Kevin finally wrote a post. Don’t count on mine being as long, we will see. Also, watch out – this ramble is full of spoilers.

Book cover from the internet.

Book cover from the internet.

Jaime Lee Moyer wrote a book called Delia’s Shadow. It is about a woman you can see ghosts. She leaves her home in San Fransisco to avoid seeing ghosts – cause that is crazy and she doesn’t want to be insane. weirdly, New York doesn’t seem to have ghosts at least for the first two and half years of her self-imposed exile. Then, one particularly strong ghost finds Delia and latches on, effectively driving her back to San Fransisco and the world of crazy people. San Fransisco is currently plagued with a serial killer and Delia’s ghost was one of his victims.

Back in San Fransisco Delia returns to her adopted home, where her adopted mother is dying and her adopted sister, Sadie, is about to be married, to Jack. Naturally Jack’s best man, Gabe, is single – as our female lead must fall in love with someone suitable by the end of the book. Of course, Gabe with his tragic history and dead first wife will match Delia’s own tragic history with two dead parents – being an orphan is sad. Both Jack and Gabe are lead detectives on the current serial murder case – which is theoretically the focus of the plot.

The story is set in the late 1800’s or early 1900’s – I don’t think a date was give. It is simple and logical in its set and competently written. I was going to say it was good, solid book – not brilliant as it lacked that indescribable spark that elevates good writing to inspired writing – until I started thinking about it.

The plot is simple – there are two detectives, a mass murderer and a city full of victims. The murders resemble those that occurred nearly thirty years earlier, down to the same brutality used on each victim, the same signature on the letters sent first to the newspaper and then to the lead detective. Threats are made against the city and then against the detective and his family (in present time, this includes Delia and Sadie). At the same time the Pan-American Fair is taking place in the city – oh and Sadie and Jack are planning their wedding.

Ghosts and emotional auras are the magic in the world. Technology includes cars starting to replace horse-drawn carriages, electric lights and cameras.

All the usual points seemed to happen. The ghosts try to threaten Delia. Delia and Gabe start off trying to be polite but indifferent to each other, but fall in love. Sadie is kidnapped by the murder towards the end and it is a race to save her life. Only, the story struggled in several key areas.

The main character is Bland. She is colourless, weak and while she defends her ghost from being sent away Delia doesn’t want to use her ghost to solve these murders. Delia’s sections are all written first person, which means a long steam of internal dialogue and a lot of ‘telling’ rather than ‘showing’. For example, we get a couple paragraphs of Delia reflecting on the stupidity of her decision to leave San Fransisco in favour of New York – because as she points out in the most high-handed fashion, that move did not change her ability to see ghosts, the way Sadie felt/looked at Delia and only meant Delia spent three years away from the people she loved. Thank you for that moral lesson.

Gabe’s sections are written in the third person – for contrast I assume. Though each time we have a change in perspective that character’s name in is written as the header. Gabe’s perspective is to show us insight into the workings of the police as they hunt down the killer. The police seem to act like those on TV; there is nothing rich or interesting about the manner in which the police are written.

Both of the above are more style points; writing. The other aspect of the writing was the error I found in one passage. The author has gathered five people for a séance and she carefully and precisely tells us where each person sits, then changes the location of two characters. It really stood out.

The biggest problem, the must unforgivable problem the book has is with motivations. Two people in particular were not well thought out. Jack appears to be irrationally angry with his family. His father, Jack discovers later in life, lied to him. The father told two lies: the first we learn is that the woman Jack knew as his mother was actually his stepmother. Though, if the woman raised him as her own, then I don’t understand why Jack was so angry. And I must have missed something because I don’t remember why there was any conflict between Jack and his stepmother – it seemed like forced conflict. The second occurs when we discover that Delia’s ghost, the woman who was killed in the murders 30 years ago and has been haunting Delia for the past six months, is Jack’s biological mother. Jack’s father told him his mother died of cholera (not that she disappeared). Of course the police at the time didn’t know the ghost’s name, so they could never actually inform the family. Again, I don’t know why Jack was so vehemently angry.

Bigger than Jack’s irrational anger, was the motivation of the killer. So, apparently the murder, Ethan, spends two years with his crazy uncle when his own mother dies and his father can’t cope. In those two years, normal young Ethan (about six when he leaves) because a crazed, death hungry psychopath. As he grows up he starts torturing and killing people in order to have their souls judged by the Egyptian gods. Really, really doesn’t make any sence. There is nothing inherently evil about the plethora of Egyptian gods associated with death. So to claim that Ethan kills on their behalf is bizarre and requires more of an explanation than ‘my uncle told me to’. What was wrong with the uncle? How was he able to brainwash and corrupt a child so thoroughly. I know the story was trying to say something about how even the most brutal people can appear normal with wives and children. But that Ethan, so depraved in the killings, so thoroughly obsessed had an innocent wife and child seems far beyond likely. The book tries to say that Ethan never stopped killing (during those 30 intervening years – he was a youth when he first terrorized the city and would now be late 40’s) but why did the ghosts suddenly take an interest in stopping him? Why did Ethan suddenly return to San Fransisco and start sending letters to the newspaper & police. The letters were not apparently a thing for 30 years (did he forget how to write for that length of time?).

Oh, and finally, how did the police manage to keep the entire city from knowing there was a serial killer on the loose? Someone, almost anyone associated with the crimes would have leaked the problem. This is not something you can covered up for months on end.

In the end Delia’s Shadow is Ok. I reads well at first glance, a little slow and colourless, but it does not hold up under further consideration. Passable, I suppose – if you want to discuss the psychology of crime and complain about how this killer is unrealistic.

Shadowy Shadows

To begin with: Happy Canada Day! May you enjoy some delicious BBQ and Fireworks on this the first day of the seventh month. I am not certain I am going to actually make it out to watch the fireworks, but I am sure some of our neighbours will do the honours anyway.

This is the book cover taken from the internets.

This is the book cover taken from the internets.

The book: Shadows.

The author: Robin McKinley

The plot: Magic doesn’t exist in the Newworld, only science. Genecor has excised the gene from those living in the Newworld. Instead the populace realise on technology to deal with the weird and dangerous warps to the fabric of reality. Maggie, however, is starting to suspect there is something wrong with her new stepfather. When she looks at him, she can see them: the Shadows. An undulating mass that wriggled free of his own logical shadow. She is not happy about this new development, though she is determined her weird new stepfather is not going to ruin her senior year at highschool.

I am not sure I am doing that good of a job selling this book. Of course, that would fit perfectly with my first impressions. I want to start this review by saying that I like Robin McKinley. I have read most of her novels and enjoyed many of them. She is, or can be, one of the more artistic writers I read. Which is to say there are long expositions of description, perhaps some internal dialogue and very little action. I would, to my brother’s frustration, describe her work as leaning towards watercolour – a little washed out and hard to see. Perhaps more impressionistic?

That said she has some very beautiful prose and I do quite like a number of her other stories. This one was a challenge to get into. It felt like a slog to read the first half-dozen chapters. It was the style, not the story, that was my stumbling block. The narrative is told in the first person (not my most favourite) and it was rambling. It lacked a clear, clean, direct timeline as it tried to provide the reader with a lot of world building. Unfortunately this made for a very tedious start to the book. I had thoughts of putting on my shelf and ignoring its uncompleted being, except I had nothing else to read last night. Fortunately things do start to pick up, the narrator meanders less as she focusses on the present problems. There are still a number of reflective sections when we are told about past events, but those are skimmable.

The world itself is a rather interesting alternate earth. It is very science-fiction, despite the heavy inclusion of magic. The Newworld (as opposed to the Oldworld, Farworld, Midworld or Southworld) is science/tech focused. It is trying to rid itself of magic. It is also facing the regular problem of rips in reality (or some such thing) just like the rest of the world.

The expletives are largely tech focused: ‘hot wire’, ‘dead battery’. It is everyday slang for the characters of the story and a good detail in the world building. Though, it can feel a bit confusing, especially at the start of the narrative when everything is new and odd sounding.

I also really liked the inclusion of Japanese phrases. They were added for world building flavour as one of the secondary characters has a Japanese background. It just so happens that I am currently studying Japanese, so I was tickled to be able to read these inclusions.

So, to sum up this review. The story is rambling, particularly at the beginning. However, if you continue forward there are some excellent world building elements, solid characters and interesting story to be discovered. It is a good read, just not as smooth as some other stories.

After the Golden Age

Strawberries are delicious – especially those you have picked yourself.

Also, I just finished reading After the Golden Age by Carrie Vaughn. It is a superhero novel, that I probably wouldn’t have chosen based on the ugly cover or the title. I in fact found it on someone elses recommended list. It was a good recommendation.

Image of the cover from the internet.

Image of the cover from the internet.

The story follows Celia West, the daughter of two prominent superhumans (superheros): Captain Olympus and Spark. Unlike her talented parents, Celia is not gifted with amazing powers. She is thoroughly normal. Unfortunately that makes her an easy target for all the villains of Commerce City. I think she has been kidnapped some half-dozen times before the story starts and she is kidnapped nearly another half-dozen times before the story ends. She is very good at being a victim.

Celia rebels against her famous family and strikes out on her own. She goes to college, studies hard and becomes an accountant. Yup, that is the excitement of her job. However, despite efforts to live her own life, Celia is drawn back into the world of superhumans when the super-villian Destructor is brought to trial. Celia is called in as a forensic accountant. All the things she thought she had left behind suddenly come back into play.

I thought the book was very well written. The moments of going back in time do a good job of showing, rather than just telling, some of the incidents bringing the characters to their present point. The motivations of the heroes and villains are compelling – always a good thing in a story.

The book has a lot of comic book superhero influences. Warren West, aka Captain Olympus, is the head of a massive corporation (like Batman). He has a generic superpower of strength and invincibility (like Captain America – I suppose, with a little of the Hulk’s anger thrown in). Suzanne West, aka Spark, has a fire ability. Together they formed the Olympiad vigilante group that came to include the Bullet (super speed) and Mentis (telepathy). Naturally they operate out of West Corp. huge skyscraper, complete with impressive penthouse, and secret operations room. The asylum, where Destructor is residing during the Trial of the Century is reminiscent of Arkam Asylum. Commerce City is a sufficiently generic city filled with people, gangs, cops and superhumans.

I do like the trial aspect of the book, which seemed to pull from Al Capone’s own history. Simon Sito, aka Destructor, is brought to trial for tax evasion and other accounting illegalities. Even Captain Olympus is incredulous that the evil super-villain will be tried, not for his heinous crimes of destruction, but for tax technicalities.

That the emotionally scarred and very normal Celia is the protagonist makes this book. It is an interesting dive into a world where superheroes exist. I like the way it protrays the rather obsessed vigilantes. I like the way it looks at the negatives of being a superhero or being related/involved with superheroes. The story feels real, rather than cartoonish in its portrayal of the world and characters. In the end, superheroes aren’t that spectacular and just like other people super-villains have to stand trial.

In a world saturated with the glory of masked men running around in skin-tight suits and claiming they act in the name of justice, this was more interesting and believable way of looking at that world. I would recommend this book. It was a good and compelling story, even if it was a little fluffy.

Retelling of the Tales

I read a book!

Ok, so no one is actually surprised by this statement as I have been reading a great deal of books lately. I just finished the latest novel by Sarah J Maas called A Court of Thorns and Roses. It is a very good retelling of several fairy tales.

The cover image taken from the internet.

The cover image taken from the internet.

Most obviously for me was the retelling of Beauty and the Beast – who could miss the obvious connection between Feyre and Belle? The story starts with Feyre hunting in the forest for her family, who have fallen on impossibly hard times. It is winter and the once prosperous merchant family (father and two sisters of dubious character) are near starving. Feyre is doing all she can to save her family and keep the promise she made to her dying mother. I think it was in the description of the family’s fall from wealth to the pathetic cottage that I linked immediately with Beauty and the Beast. Of course, the entrance of the Beast, raving and vengeful only a couple of chapters rather clinched that connection.

I should perhaps have picked up the elements of Tamlin sooner. After all, the ‘Beast’ in A Court of Thorns and Roses is called Tamlin. However, I am not quite as familiar with Tamlin’s story to have had an immediate reaction to the name. It was not until nearly the end I saw the influence: the High Queen who wants to keep Tamlin as her own consort and the trials Feyre must suffer in order to free her true love from the evil Fairy.

It was not until I was poking around on the internet I discovered the third influence that helped to shape A Court of Thorns and Roses. Woven into the novel are elements of East of the Sun and West of the Moon. Again, I am not as familiar with this classic tale. That is to say I have only read a few versions of the story, as I have only read a couple versions of Tamlin. However, the hunt for the ‘Beast’, who was taken from his castle, and the help that Feyre gains on her quest to save her true love have the flavour of East of the Sun and West of the Moon.

This is not to say that A Court of Thorns and Roses is simply a mish-mash of other fairy tales. It is an excellently woven story that combines elements and threads from three classic tales into one cohesive novel. However, because it is true to its inspiration (and rightly so), it is very predictable. Not all the details, those are original, but the over all feel of the story and the general idea of what is going to happen next is unsurprising.

That is my primary complaint. The characters themselves are strongly written. The secondary and tertiary characters bring much life to the story. The world is beautifully crafted. While I am not always fond of the Fey as a separate … creature, race, species? … they were handled well in this tale. The magic was generic, but the imagery was effectively constructed. The growth of the main character was simple and elegant in its arch. The narrative built and progressed as a good story should.

If this review seems a trifle lack-luster, then it is because the story is familiar – not in the details, but the over all plot. As most of the story followed Beauty and the Beast, which itself is well know, there is very little more to comment on. For those that like fairy tales, particularly those who love the reworking of classics, this is an amazing book. This is a book I recommend.

The Emperor’s Edge – Book Review

Can you buy a book if it is free?

Bored (but don’t tell anyone or they will want me to do things), I went to peruse the fantasy section of amazon. This is not an advertisement for the store. However, I have discovered amazon will have ebooks (kindle version only) on for $0.00. Well, I like free stuff. It makes taking a gamble on unknown authors and their novels risk free.

So I bought(?) The Emperor’s Edge by Lindsay Buroker. It was surprisingly good.

It is not a bad cover - it would look quite nice on a book shelf. But it does make for a rather uninspired picture. Image from the internet.

It is not a bad cover – it would look quite nice on a book shelf. But it does make for a rather uninspired picture. Image from the internet.

The Plot Summary:

Amaranthe Lokdon is an enforcer (police) in the Emperor’s (northern and winter locked) capital. She is female, a new trait for the city’s enforcers and looked down upon by nearly everyone. She is also dedicated to the throne. When Amaranthe is brought to the Emperor’s Chief Advisor’s (and previous Regent) notice she is offered a chance to prove her skills and advance her position in the force. Obviously, when the mission is to kill the most notorious assassin, the job is less of an opportunity for her career and more of an attempt on her life.

Sicarius is credited with numerous kills, escapes and other assassin credentials. He is deadly. He is also in the city.

Amaranthe goes in search of the assassin, only to have entire life turned upside down. While she is not killed (cause we wouldn’t have a story otherwise), she is also not successful. Sicarius points out the obvious trap the Chief Advisor had set and Amaranthe starts to put together the notion the Emperor is not safe. In fact, the Emperor is being poisoned by his Chief Advisor. This is the problem that pulls Amaranthe and Sicarius together. They must protect the Emperor and dispose of the Chief Advisor.

Our feisty heroine my not have all the deadly skills of an assassin, but she is able to devise crazy plans and recruit a rag-tag team to carry them out.

The selling feature of the book was the humour. It was a lark. Amaranthe is amusing the way she charges forward, sometimes blindly, but always with the best intentions. She is the moral compass for their small band of criminals, who are trying to do the right thing by protecting the Emperor. Of course, since they are operating outside of the law as fugitives with wanted posters, some of their methods are questionable at best.

The tone of the book reminds me of Ocean’s Eleven. There is just the right balance between serious moments, potential death, successful fighting and quips to keep the story rolling forward. The pacing is strong the story is solid and the characters are entertaining. There is not a lot of character growth, but then apparently there are some 7 books in this serial, so hopefully character growth comes over time.

Finally, a quick note on the world: it is cold – at least it is winter when this first story takes place. I get the feeling of some fantasy Scandinavian/Russian-esq world. Obviously it is not our world. But the Empire has a long history of war and culture built around war. They clearly have deep, cold, frozen winters. There is an element of steam punk or early mechanized technology with trolleys, clinkers and factories. There is also magic (mostly foreign) or as some might say: Mental Sciences. The world is fine, felling more modern than medieval. But it was not the world that held my attention throughout the story, it was the interactions between the characters and the entertainment of the situations.

Over all I enjoyed the Emperor’s Edge; it was a good romp with an engaging female lead. I may even purchase the sequel to see if it holds up.